scream (no one can hear you)

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Myungsoo can't do anything. No one can hear him scream (he is alone, again).

Foreword

 

Myungsoo was scared of the truth.
Sungyeol was oblivious as always.
And they were waiting. 
Just waiting for him to scream.

 

 

 

 

When a person screams in pain,
the actual pain is only half the noise they make.
The other half is the terror at being forced to accept that they exist.”  

― Noah Cicero, The Condemned

 

 

 

 

this is an entry for give me a year (x)

prompts revealed at the end.

 

credits: 

poster - kimxbb@fateful dreamer (thank you so, so much)

Author's Thoughts
aeterniti
i highly recommend reading the end notes ;)
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nephesh #1
Chapter 4: It's deep, but kind of vague to me. What was the meaning of the second last sentence, when it says he screamed until they were no more?
KStoryWriterx #2
Hello! Keep up the good work. n_nb
nephesh #3
Chapter 2: I'm dying in curiosity :(.. Your story is so good ! Update soon :)
cyd4294 #4
Chapter 2: sungjong is still there ..
did yeol and namu really did died , or is it just myung imagination playing trick n him since he's too paranoid ?
wanokufinite #5
Chapter 2: .............

poor soo

.............

;___;
soo_aegi #6
Chapter 2: My poor myungsoo...
writerofthistory #7
Chapter 1: Oh good gracious. I am freaked.
peachysoo #8
Chapter 1: I think my favorite thing about your writing is the imagery and your writing style. It's just so captivating and with this piece, it made me feel a bit nervous about what was going on. The buildup is quite similar to a horror movie and since I love horror movies, I definitely enjoy how you have started this piece.

I like how instead of using red for blood, you used pink, which seems like a nice color that many wouldn't associate with blood but felt perfect with how you were writing everything.

I really enjoy how you're writing Myungsoo's mental state and how he seems to be at this point in his life where he's almost a slave to those voices. It's interesting to see how he hears and see things out of basically nothing it seems and how he acts to get rid of them, the use of physical pain being one of them. And the line about them persuading Myungsoo into going into the river was a nice touch because it definitely tells everyone where Myungsoo is at that point. I like it.

Mmm... I wonder who 'her' is. I know you mentioned something about Myungsoo's mother taking away the light (I like that line a lot too), but I don't know if that's what you're trying to go for. So I'll guess I'll have to keep reading on (as if I won't have fun doing so :D).

A wonderful first chapter and I can't wait to see where you will take this. And I definitely will be checking out some of your other fics when I have time, so most likely expect some more comments. :D
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