Compartment 6

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Their manager looked at them with a reluctant expression, soaked with irritation.

“I don’t like it,” he said, turning his eyes to Suho, trying to ignore how Sehun had lazily tried to use Luhan's shoulder as a pillow. “But I guess I don’t have a choice. Those idiots in Moscow can’t handle anything themselves… Very well”.

He drew a weary sigh and looked as if he went through a lot of inner prayers before he continued.

“You can go alone, I’ll just pick you up in Moscow. Are you sure you can handle the time on your own?”

“Of course we can,” Suho assured him, straightening his back a little. “It’s only eight hours on a one-way train. We’ll do fine”.

Their manager still didn’t look completely reassured however. He kept chewing on his lip, eyeing each one of the eleven present members with concern.

“You’re absolutely sure you can manage on your own?”

“Yes”.

“Okay, I’m not saying I like it, not at all. But it’s only eight hours and they can’t wait for me any longer.” Another sigh. “I’m off to the airport then. I’ll see you in eight hours and please, promise me to behave at least somewhat decent. Remember you have a showcase to do the moment you get off the train”.

“We will, don’t worry”. Suho smiled in relief. “And besides, we’ll just be sitting on a train all night, what could possibly happen?”

Foreword

Thank you for the gorgeous poster ToxicGyu from Metric Constellations! ♥

 

Hello everyone! ~

My first EXO-story, as well as my first suspense story, on this site is here and I really hope you’ll receive it well!
I’ve worked on it for some time now, so I hope it’s not completely rubbish ^^

I wanted to write a story centred around a murder and its investigation, but please don’t think that I dislike any one of the EXO-boys or believe that this kind of thing could happen in real life. Everything is, of course, purely fictional. And even though there’s some blood and violence and very, very subtle ual content in this story I’m not going to rate it, unless it is requested, because I really don’t think it qualifies as .
Regarding the tags I had a really hard time deciding which pairings I could tag without feeling as if I was cheating you, so please let me know if you think an important tag is missing!

Also, as a small request, I’d really really adore you all if you would comment with who you think the murderer is, just so I know if I was able to hide it at all XD It would be a great help! Thank you in advance ~

Enough from me, please enjoy the story!

(and mind you that I use fanfiction to practice my English skills, so I am really sorry if you come across any misspelled words or stupid grammar mistakes!)

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Clairebearxxx #1
Chapter 10: I think i know who did it but im not sure but i love the story
youypanda #2
This was such a thrill to read. Loved it! It left me on the edge every time I came to the end of a chapter. I thought it was going to be some cliche story with unexplained murders that happens to every member but I'm pleasantly surprised that it's just the unraveling of the Hunhan murder. And of course, when things got complicated with Kris being dead.
Personally I wish I could write such genres but I can't and I'm glad I found a story with a well-established mystery plot. :)
Thanks for sharing!
minrawrs #3
Chapter 10: First off l, this fic was amazing! I've never read something like this before so it was really a shocker but it was so well written! It seriously had me on the edge of my seat the whole time haha. I'm kind of happy you finished it too! :) at least we have a clean cut ending~^^
Next, will you be willing to do an analysis on the story? I feel like I'm just stupid because I don't think I understood some stuff that went on. Like did yixing kill hunhan? Why and how? And who killed kris? It seems like it was either baek or chanyeol...? I want to know who yixing is covering for and why...so many questions left >< but anyways you did a great job!! ^^ looking forward to more from you~
fujiokamomo #4
Chapter 10: I'm wondering a lot about who the real murderer is... I hope you could continue this story! I loved it!
OpheliaSalia #5
I would honestly not be surprised if Lay was the killer. I've had the feeling it was him since the first chapter really. But now everything sort of fits. He had the perfect alibi and no one seemed to be suspecting him and if it wasn't for him slipping up and Tao putting peices together no one probably would either.

As they said before jealousy is a really strong motive and Lay was in love with Luhan who was with Sehun (like what they said about Kai but the other waý around). He also knew what Kris had done before Baekhyun told everyone so pinning the blame on him was easy.

I'm not so sure he is the one who killed Kris though. I might be totaly wrong about all this though. We'll just have to wait and see won't we...
deerbait #6
Chapter 8: I really hope it's not Tao (but it would be an amazing major plot twist if it was). I think this cliffie might've hinted at Lay being the killer but I'm not really good with mysteries so I can't really tell OTL. Either way this story is really good and really suspenseful
minrawrs #7
Chapter 7: Wow. Kris really did that to them? Unforgiving. What a disgusting human being. Idk about this fic but I have a feeling kris didn't kill hunhan. I think it could've been someone else considering he's dead now too...unless kris did kill them and someone else killed him? Ugh this fic is so intense. I was literally (◎_◎;) the entire time reading lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!! ^^
aimeime #8
Chapter 7: what?????????? how???????
kris dead??????
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