My Living Hell

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My Living Hell.

 

Hell was real, digging its claws into the shredded remains of my life.

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Not even the alcohol, nor the blades, could supress my shattered soul as it screamed at me, night after night.

When I'm left with nothing other than that of my thoughts, what will happen? Is everything just an illusion, a trick of my untrustworthy mind or a cruel reality? 

Foreword

 Annyeong.

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Byuntae is back with another story, except this time it's prime creation is for a writing competition. This one to be exact >>--Myth and Mysterious

When i get to uploading it, i hope you all like it! I don't think i have to go through all of the pointless copyright crap , right? okay. >.<

Anyways..make sure to leave some comments, even though the following story may be slightly crap! 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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toomanyEXOfeels #1
Chapter 2: *gasp* i just realised i hadn't subscribed to this and i missed that you put up the last chapter up like ages ago :O i'll just upvote it instead :D

woooooah mei-mei this was so GREAT!!! Poor Taotao that would be horrific :/ actually i had a dream like this once (which is kinda scary) but everytime i went to touch it it was me that got hurt rather than the person i was touching :O like my hand would start burning or my foot would get like a weird tingling feeling and when i woke up my hand and foot were actually sore :O anyways not that you really needed to know that but back on track this was AWESOME!!!!! GREAT JOB <333
ju_huggable #2
Chapter 1: WOAH!!! THIS IS REALLY REALLY GOOD!! I REALLY REALLY LOVE IT though it's sad Tao saw his girl die but ITS STILL AWESOME! XD UPDATE MORE!! Or was that the end?? I HOPE NOT!! T.T
toomanyEXOfeels #3
Chapter 1: Wah this is really good :D I really liked it! Angsty...just my style haha ^_^ I really don't know if I could give feedback because there was nothing I didn't not like about it :D the writing style was all good except for the occasional miss of a word or something but nothing majorly bad :) ( I cant believe you are almost 4 years younger and your writing is better than mine :( i guess some people were born with it :D) It all made sense so a full 11 out of 10 from me haha i liked the story line but maybe (as turtle told me about my story) put something suspenseful at the end of the chapter so it keeps people intrigued (but I understand that that's hard to do cause I can never come up with things like cliffhangers either) *shrugs* I dunno but still I don't think it needs much changing :D sorry I'm not much help haha but I really did like it :D
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