I found your story, when I was browsing through "heartbreak" and "key" tag. The description and ESPECIALLY foreword (on the verge of separation) really caught my attention, so I started to read without knowing what would happen.
I was really suprised by the ending - as others have already said, I got worried, when I read the word "gun", but I hoped...hoped that it wouldn´t turn out the worst possible way. ^^"
Then the whole story made even more sense to me, because I didn´t understand why Key kept apologizing, somehow I was sure that he wasn´t apologizing just for "leaving Jjong"... T__T
But why did he make such a decision? Why did he have to kill himself? Why did he have to leave Jjong, when he apparantly didn´t want to and still loved him deeply? What happened to him? Why he was so hurt except leaving Jjong?
And how could Jjong forgive him the suicide? T__T
It was really sad, you made me cry! XD, but it was also very beautifully written. I really enjoyed it a lot. ;)
There are really many parts which I liked a lot - the beginning when you explain the situation and his expression, the moment when he says that he wishes it would be just a nightmare, when he kissed their intertwined hands, when he confessed, when they kissed for the last time... T___T So beautiful and heartbreaking! ♥
I especially like this part:
“I want you to know... wherever I will be... you are the one for me...”
“But promise me, you’ll let me go. Forget me... and please... forgive me...”
“I love you.”
Tears welled up in my eyes, and just as @Ran501 said, When I saw a gun, I thought: "Oh my Gosh a suicide!" .... but I loved the way you expressed everything. Great Job. Keep it up! ^^
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