Title 9/10: 

yes! I like the title! It is eye-catching and make viewers want to read your story .

Foreword/description 13.5/15: 

yes! It make viewers want to read your story . Your foreword is interesting . But it would be more fun if your put some colours in it . It will be more interesting !

Appearance 7/10: 

the appearance ... I don't know how to say it . But your flows is fast . It is arranged but it will be more interesting if you make it more neat ? You can also put the designer of your graphics in the foreword .

Characterization 18/20: 

The characterization .. I like the way you make their accounts' name . The character also follow their roles . but Seo ? hacker ? so funny ~

Writing skills 15/20: 

I can't say there's no wrong but there is but not that much . Please improve your grammar . FIGHTING !

Originality/creativity 18/20: 

about originality .. I can't say I have never see something like this . I have but it's not GG's fanfics . It was like EXO , SUJU and TEEN TOP's have fanfics about chat room . and ..creativity . I like your creativity making GG's chat room fics .

Extra 2/5: 

I can't say that i don't want to give but some people may think that the story is same as EXO or SUJU chat room . 

total : 82.5/100

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story link! Right Now.... It's SNSD's Chat Room!

request done by : miss_right

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