Title 8/10: 

I give you 8 because it is eye-catching but SOME people dooesn't like violence . And I do like it !

Foreword/description 10/15: 

It is good but it would be more fun if you put it is the sequel from the Battle Royale first . So, people won't confused when you put 'after last year's strange battle royale'

Appearance 7/10: 

It will be more fun if you put the link of the first one first before you tell about the sequel . I like your story , it is arranged neatly . but , you have no graphics and background that will catch viewers eye to read more

Characterization 18/20: 

I like the way you put the character . The first one you only put 4 of them and now you change it . 

Writing skills 15/20: 

there's a bit grammar error . I only press the foreword only . the part of 'the duel BETWEEN the duo PRECEDED...' you should put it 'the duel AMONG the duo PROCEDED...'

the part of 'Gradually his heart comes to a halt and his goes..' you can also put it as 'a halt and his go slack'..

Originality/creativity 18/20: 

it is original and you put your best in it . I have never read something like this before so.. FIGHTING!

Extra 3/5: 

I can't give you so much extra since you don't update fastly . You can't make your viewer wait . They will get bored easily

total : 79/100

great work ! Do much improve about your writing !

story link! Battle Royale II

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