FALLING APART.

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Both sides were hurt at the end of We Got Married, but neither side could have ever admitted so. Everything seems to be running on the good side for them as the tabloids say but, Nichkhun felt hollow since their end. Will Nichkhun realize that he never stopped loving Victoria? Or will Khuntoria follow along and suffer the fate of their fellow ex-WGM couples?

Foreword

I was in the writing mood when I wrote the first chapter and now apparently it's becoming a fanfic even though it was going to be a two-shot.

-- UPDATE : May 5th 2014 : It's not gonna be a fic. I didn't have time but now I just have no interest in writing this any longer. Looking back, I feel like an awful writer anyhow! Sorry!

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BaoRue #1
Please update this fic. i will not lose hope and will keep waiting! fighting!
Kpopcornluvr #2
Chapter 2: will you be updating this fic? i hope you do!
Khuntoria_6110 #3
Chapter 2: So sad, but great fanfic! Please update soon!
RedGem #4
Chapter 2: HUHU when are you going to update? I've been checking back for this fanfic to continue but I guess youre really busy T_T please update soon.
RedGem #5
Chapter 2: Weepeee! Thank you for writing the 2nd chapter!
So it was Khun who ended things between them, and regretting it in the end. I hope the next chapters will explain why he does so.
Thank you again and I'll be waiting!
aarasa #6
Chapter 2: First of all, Yay yay yay! thank you for deciding to make this into an actual fic instead of a 2 shot! I'm so happy :D Secondly, ooh this chapter is good! As much as I wanna whack Khun for making Vic cried, I think there's some underlying reason why he said those cruel words to her. Hmmm....I guess I'll have to wait till the next chapter to find out what really happened between them. Overall, it's a very good start of (what I'm sure is going to be) a very good fanfic! Keep up the good work ^^
RedGem #7
Chapter 2: OH and one more thing it would also be good idea if you are going to follow both of their real lives, I mean what happened in reality to both Khun and Victoria, it would be something like going "behind the scenes".
RedGem #8
Chapter 2: aarasa's suggestion is really good. Hey, no worries. You can update as often as you want (but don't make it too long :))
But really you have to continue this fanfic. Like I said this is really a promising story AND you definitely have to make Khuntoria end up together in the end!
aarasa #9
Chapter 2: Just giving you some ideas. First, Khuntoria must end up together pls! preferably a happy ending would be nice.
Second, judging from what you wrote in the 1st chapter, there are many ways you can make this story longer. Ex, a suspense/drama fic. Vic was in a hurry, running away from someone she thought was snooping around. If you want, you can make it so that there really is someone snooping/stalking Vic (okay, I know you'll need to think more about the details of the plot, but it could be a start) Or you could make it a melodrama-ish kinda story. In the 1st chapter Khun was reminiscing about his time with Vic and he asked her where has she been for the past 2 years? Well you could think of something dramatic-ish that could have happen during the past 2 years that prevented them from seeing each other. Or you could even do a rom-com fic. I know that the tone of your 1st chapter doesn't scream rom-com, but you can turn it around in the 2nd chapter. Some misunderstanding, she blames him, he blames her, they fight trying to out win one another and fall in love again in the process? hahaha I'm just blabbering to be honest. I just want to read Khuntoria fic and I think you have what it takes to write a good story :)
P.S. sorry for the long comment :P
aarasa #10
Chapter 1: what are you talking about? this is great! Please make this a long story. I totally agree with you that there's not enough fics of Khuntoria! ^^
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