Our Timeless Memories

Description

"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream."

At exactly five minutes 'till three in the afternoon, Yi Fan would sit down for his tea.

And everyday, at that exact time, he would see, no- meet the same girl with a pretty smile and beautifully sad eyes. 

Foreword

"Have I met you somewhere before?" Yi Fan inquired curiously- his eyebrows knitting as he concentrated on the girl before him. Her scent was oddly familiar- like sunshine and vanilla after the spring rain. 

A small, gloom soaked smile played on her lips. "No - never," she whispered, so softly that it was as if he were listening to the wind's song.

popgirl345543
[OTM] update because its my birthday :)

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koreanchick #1
Chapter 8: woah haven't read this in a long time. update soon
minniemina21
#2
Chapter 8: I was checking the stories I upvoted & checked this fic again.. please update soon!!
eunixw #3
Chapter 8: Where is SeoHyun now? She said she will always be at his side but where is she? :(( Quick Kris, find her now!
white_blue
#4
Chapter 8: Kris-ah, please bring Seobaby home. She is waiting for you T_T
Please let them meet again, they have suffered a lot T_T
Popopo #5
Chapter 8: Update soon please:)
Eycha_sk11 #6
Chapter 8: Seobaby having a hard time.. She'as hurts... Sobss.. Kris, bring ur Joohyun back !!!!
nanjang #7
Chapter 8: I really hope it will be happy ending, you know.
No dying. No forgetting. No parting away please~
gnsforever #8
Thank you for updating!
It makes my heart hurt knowing Kris is slowly remembering his past.
I hope Seohyun returns soon.
Please keep up the good work Unnie! :D♥
OfSereneNights
#9
Chapter 7: Hmm, what if this story was actually in a reverse motion. Like most of the things happening was just actually a flashback XD
OfSereneNights
#10
Chapter 6: Chapter six is short but enough to let me know what actually is happening. First, it reminded me of the fact that he's currently going in the name of Yifan and he didn't know who Kris was.

I think even with that simple detail, you were able to emphasize the fact that the Kris Seohyun had was slowly fading away-until he finally preferred Yifan over Kris; which meant that Yifan's the new Kris.

Also, I kept wondering why people always say that the two of them had a car accident. If I'm not mistaken, even before, Kris admitted Seohyun about his disease and the high possibility that he'll forget her.

Though, the image of the girl you were describing on the last paragraph was still questionable for meee T.T