Be my immortal love

Description

this story talks about a guy looking for a will power to feed his soul by killing ,then he feels bad a bout him self and he trys to start again in a new town,after a while he find him self in love with the girl who hold the will power that he needs .

so will he kill her or will he find a way to tell her that he is a beast ,and will she eccept him as he is or will she run a way and forgets about him 

we will know throw this story ^_^

characters:

park sang hyun (thunder):

the guy who the story run about, good, kind, quite and talentted on playing his 

guitar.

 

lee sang jin (nina):

she's the kindest girl in school but key distroy her popularty by some rumors

and she become the wiredest girl in school, she smart, sweet and friendly.

jong hyun (shinee):

 

key(shinee):

Mblaq :

 

 

shinee:

taemin:

 

 

 

 

 

chanyeol:

 

 

and more charecters are waiting for you to see  <3

Foreword

 

fears and lies ,pain and hate 
all of these things lives secretly in the smallest corner in your hart .
you live normally without noticing it .
but when it comes for the bad and the hard times in your life ,when you look for a way out of this room ,when you need some one to hold your hand and help you to start again .
all of these fears that traps you ,the lies that your trying to convince your self with ,the pain that brings you to your knees ,the hate that your hart fell with which makes your view to this life dark 
all of it starts with a small dark thought ,then start growing  the seed of hatred inside of you .
when a simple person appears in your life and hold your hands to show you a sanctuary behind a simple sweet smile that makes your hart beat once again .
but when it comes for the time that you should confess to him that your a devil trying to find the will power inside of his hart .
what will be his reaction ,will he run and never look into your eyes again ,or will he eccept you as you are and love you no matter what .
we shall find out through this story .
hope you like it  ^_^

Comments

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anaghem97 #1
Nice writing sweety <3
keep it up ^_^
sabreen97 #2
Chapter 6: Nice
update soon
cant wait
honeybooboo
#3
update soon!!!! FIGHTING!!! ^_^
KingLru #4
Chapter 6: Although fics like this are not really my style it's sounds okay. Angst, dear god >.<
invicarious #5
Chapter 6: Legasp :O This is getting intense! Your writing is really good ^^
alaa99 #6
nice one really its the best
honeybooboo
#7
Chapter 6: yay!!!! you updated again!!! ohhh interesting i wonder what shinee will do to get back!!!! sometimes being to cocky can get you in serious stuff!! hehe
honeybooboo
#8
Chapter 4: sis!!!! how come you havent updated *pout* please update when you can ok!!! ^_^
whiteprince
#9
this is really interesting unni! Keep updating! Can't wait!! ><
DarkShadow
#10
Sounds interesting
Will try n read soon*