Prologue

Back story: Prince: Thank you all for coming to my ceremonial crowning! It gives me great honor to be following in my farther's footsteps. I'm very grateful to every- *bomb explosion* *screaming* EVERYONE EVACUATE! Prince Jeremy leads everyone to the nearest exit while the King and queen try and find out who is causing the trouble. Queen: Jeremy! Prince: yes mother Queen: you must go to safety Prince: but my people! Queen: We'll help them. But just follow me. Prince Jeremy follows her inside the castle and into an unfamiliar room. Prince: what is this? Queen: the mirror room. Each of the mirrors will take you into another realm. Your father and I have chosen this realm. we have already made plans for you. Prince: What?! Wait, when will I come back? Queen: I'm not sure yet. Prince: But I can't leave when I'm needed the most! Queen: Yes you can. As soon as you walk in someone will explain everything to you. Just go! Prince:NO! MOTHER! *Prince Jeremy enters other realm* Stranger: Welcome Prince Jeremy. We've been awaiting your arrival.

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Dreamingofmyprince #1 Apr 1, 2013 22:52:52

Chapter 3: I know that it looks that way. Sorry but I'm posting it on my phone so it isn't coming or the way I wanted it to and its been a while since I posted so I thought I needed to post it today. Sorry, I promise I'll fix it in the next chapter and I'll do it on my laptop instead. I originally started writing this fanfic on my instagram so I'm basically just copying and pasting. If you want to get ahead you can check out my instagram, @im_your_boyfriend. I've posted like two more chapters on there. But if not, please be patient. I'm trying my best. Please continue supporting me! :D

fanficlover123 #2 Feb 18, 2013 03:42:32

Chapter 2: The story is really interesting and nice but I really hope that during the characters are making a conversation, you will use "...." I also hope that you will make paragraphs and not put all the sentences together. Putting "...." and paragraphs not only help your fiction look organised, it also help people give the impression of neat while reading your fic. Hehe, but of course, if you don't want then its okay :) I'm gonna subscribe to your story and yeah, hope you update soon :)