They're both aware of how superficial the world can be, it's something they both understand and use to their discretion. A politican's daughter never expects someone of his likes to understand, neither does he.
Chapter 6: Greetings Author, I just want to tell you that you really did a great job at impressing me.
Your characterization is perfect and I absolutely adore the way you set your scenes. The fact that the plot touches the host (a job that most of the Japanese frowns upon) subject excites me the most (you see, it happens that I have always liked to read about professions like geisha etc a lot). Hosts and hostesses often have a lot of stories to tell, from controversial to heart-warming ones, and these people in the society are some of the ones I salute to. I'm very happy that you have chosen to touch on such topic and you did a great job in portraying normal daily lives of hosts; how they really work to earn a living and to the simplest details when one of the host had his pay cut because of a double-crossing customer.
I absolutely love how you portray your Kris, he was totally a brilliant, hard-working, professional guy working to make ends meet and he knows where he stands. I really liked how you put your characters in sensible positions because that's how most of us are like in the real society.
Compliments aside, if you're looking for criticisms; anything I could point out was just some small grammatical errors that really can be overlooked and they are really not noticeable. And! I wished you had wrote this at a longer length with more twists. I can't ask you for a sequel because I know it will destroy the story. I hope you will write more such stories (geisha or cabaret perhaps), I really liked them a lot. If you ever need referencing, you can try to search up 'Jotei', it's a pretty decent Jdrama about hostesses.
All in all, I really like your writing style and I hope you will write more stories such as these (preferably KrisToria (even though I'm a Kyutoria shipper but I think you write Kristoria better)). Will support and subscribe to you. Keep it up! Have a nice day and God bless! Cheers, Vlad.
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