An Empty Hole

Description

 

TOP, grinning cutely, asked, “So where are you taking me?”

                “Somewhere,” she replied mysteriously while leaning on him, her head only up to TOP's chest.. Smiling even wider, TOP wrapped his head around her while putting his head on her head as they walked.  It was not, however, her petite frame that made her so lovable, but her contagious smile that was so bright it made the sun seem darker. The innocence in her eyes gave even more shine to her smile, yet they were stunted by her partly cloudy ignorance.

 

Foreword

Hi guys. I wrote this for a contest  called The Cafe!!!

This is based off the song Café by BigBang. I hope you can see how it is based off of it! I wanted the story to be thoughtful and realistic and get the actual character of TOP into the story by his facial expressions, etc. Please comment if you like it and tell me how to get better if you don't!

K. bies!

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewed by: the moustache hut

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