I think i love you...

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You, Byun hee min 18 years old your a very pretty,smart and kind   every guy in school wants to be yours and girls try to be your friend because of 

your brother. Your brother is Byun Beak Hyun all the girls in middle school would always try to be your friend because of you handsome brother

 

but after he got into SM you had to move schools before people find out and try to hurt you.After he got into SM you two would meet up late at night 

to spend every minute you could with each other, because of your close bond it was hard to let him go (live in SM). You and your brother were 

always close he would never leave your side and till this day he still stands by you. But the thing is exo has no idea that Beak Hyun has a sister 

because he never wanted to tell them before one of them might have feelings for you....

 

 

 

Peek of whats coming up in on of these chapters...." What did you just say.." you said as you looked up to him with wide eyes, 

He bent down and cupped your cheeks in his hands " I love you" he said in a sweet tone.

Foreword

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- You (Byun hee min) 

   * Kind hearted and very happy 

  * She is not a person that would just sit around she likes to move and get up thats why she took piano with her brother 

   Ballet for 7 years and tango for 6 years also singing.

 * for byun hee min singing and dancing is every thing to her with out it she feels lost

 

 

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- Beakhyun

* Your Older brother

* A singer of the group Exo

 

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- Kai (Kim jong in)

* Part of the group Exo

* Dancer

* One year older than you 

 

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- Luhan 

* lead dancer,and vocal in Exo-M also the face of the group

* Five years older than you 

* Your Ex-boyfriend 

 

 

 

 

 

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DespisedSecret
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Chapter 1: Hi~ I think your story is adorable :) since it's only the first chapter, of course it seems a bit out of place, but all first chapters are because they're building up the characters' personalities etc. :) I think that you should submit this story to the review shop I work for : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/372853/r-e-v-i-e-w-s-h-o-p-angst-drama-request-review-requestshop-reviewshop
It would help improve some mistakes and give a few nice suggestions :) just request for me as your reviewer (DespisedSecret) since I've already read your story :)
If you don't, that's okay :) but I think I can offer you some good advice to help ^.^!
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