Is it him?

I think i love you...

Byun Hee Min:

"Yobo" hearing that name being called was was like millions of gun shots flying to my heart. My head

 

was blank and my body was unable to move,that name being called was to much for me. I wanted to 

 

look but something was telling me no. But I have to look it was the only way to find out how I feel about 

 

him. My head was slowly turning to where he was my hands were shaking so much I had no control 

 

over it so many things were going through my head. I wanted him i missed him, i wanted him in my arms

 

even after he hurt me why am i feeling like this? was it because i still loved him? why are all my feelings

 

comeing back now of all times. "i missed you so much yobo" the voice said as it became louder.My 

 

heart was beating so fast i thought it was going to burst out. My head was slowly faceing twards him 

 

but my heart just dropped when I saw that man. It wasn't him it was another man some other person.

 

"yobo" he said giving her a kiss on her head "i missed you so much" she said smiling. "I dont get it"

 

you said as tears rolled down your eyes. you ran by the school building  and held on to the side of the wall 

 

"he was everthing that I had,but hes gone." the words came out slowly and soft asyou held your hand to

 

your mouth covering your cry. Class already started but you didn't care about it at all you  wanted to do

 

was to see him thats all that was in your mind.

 

 

Kim Jong In:

"Aish! why cant I find the bathroom to this school" I said while walking behind a building "why is it so big! 

 

maybe I should have gone to a near by store" hitting his head with his hands lightly but then he saw a girl 

 

crying behind the building. "A girl?" he said tilting his head to the side and walking closer to her "are you 

 

okay?" I said in a soft voice so I dont scare her.

 

 

Byun Hee MIn:

A low male voice sounded in front of me, I looked up slowly and opended my eyes slowly he was tall

 

and very handsome his eyes something about it makes you want to keep looking and his lips were so full

 

all i could do was just look at him he was so handsome. "Im fine you dont need to help" you said looking at 

 

him and walking past him. He held on to your arm as you walked past him "are you okay?" he said in a low 

 

voice again. "its nothing! i just told you that!" you said as tears ran down your face again your voice was 

 

shaking. I think he saw my anger and saddness in my voice that he pulled my into a hug, being in his arms 

 

I felt safe and I just started to cry in his arms he felt so warm I just wanted to stay in his arms "just for today 

 

Im going to let out my feelings". I said to him in a soft voice while I held on to apart of his shirt.

 

 

Kim Jong In:

When I walked up to her she was crying, for some reason I wanted to hold her, I asked her if she was okay 

 

but she told me she was fine. I knew she was lying about it but I didn't want to seem rude so I spoke in a 

 

soft voice for her. when she wanted to leave I dont know why I held on to her arm I guess i feld bad.

 

After I grabed her arm she looked at me with such sad eyes that felt like it was telling me something  I 

 

dont know what it was but I pulled her in for a hug I didn't care if anyone was watching I just wanted to hold 

 

her in my arms. She was so beautiful why would she be crying? she looked like someone that I knew but i 

 

just dont now who. "just for today im going to let out my feelings" she said in a shaking voice I heard 

 

someone say that before I know I did...why does it feel like I know her? I may not know who she is but I feel

 

like I need to just do this just for today I just want to be kim jong in not kai...

 

 

Byun Hee Min:

He felt like someone I knew like i've been with him like this before some plae but I cant remember it. 

 

guess Its because im confused my feelings is all a mess and all over the place. I just need to calm down 

 

and not think about my ex then maybe I cuould be normal again. 

 

Was this chapter boring? im sorry the next chapter would be better! I promise! ^_^

 

 

 

 

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