The start

I think i love you...

Byun Hee Min (you) pov

"ughh" you said out loud as you walked into the house throwing your bag on the floor, walking up the stairs to your

 

room. just before throwing your body on the bed. Everyday is like this I have to run around town to get the boys off my

 

back, they follow me everywhere.This is why i hate having my brothers looks, it makes all the boys want to see my

 

face. "oppa...". you said quietly to your self waiting to see your brother again. Every night at 12 you and your brother

 

meet up but on somedays he has no time to see you, beacuse of his work.Just then your room door flys open "BYUN

 

HEE MIN!" as soon as you heard your name being called you jumped out of bed falling onto the floor face first.

 

"omma!" you said sitting up patting you hurt face. "my sweet baby" your mother said bending down next to you helping 

 

you up. "omma dont just open the door any time you want" you said pouting, "well this is nice, my baby girl treats me

 

like this when me and your father hardly ever come home" your mother said acting offended. you smiled and gave her

 

a big hug " omma, im happy your home but dont just open the door when i dont know your coming home okay? i

 

almost died of a heart attack" you told her as you two walked down thestairs to greet your father. "appa, i missed you"

 

you said lying your head in his arms while you guys sat on the couch. "i missed you too, me and your mother also have 

 

something to say to you" your father said looking down at you and and then back at your mother. "what is it?" looking

 

up at your father andmother with a worried face. "we want you to come to america with us" he said while looking to

 

you with a smile. "appa.... i dont know what to say" you said looking down and letting go of your father. "we have

 

everything ready for you in america, you can make lots of friends they are very nice in america oh and.." he was just

 

about to continue untill "Wait!" you said standing up off the seat trying to think about what your father just said. 

 

Beakhyun pov

You walk out of the practice room with the other members after a long day, "wow three hours of non stop practice" you

 

said out loud to the other members as you all sat down on the floor in the dorm. "yup" they all said sounding like a

 

bunch of zombies on the floor, you glanced at your phone looking to see if your sister sent a message. and found that

 

she did you then read "oppa lets meet at the same place we do every day okay? love you <3 " you smiled at the sight

 

of the cute heart at the end of the message witch made all the guys look at you. "what?" you said placing your phone

 

in your pocket, "who was that beak? Huh!" Kai said and they all started to laugh. "its no one" you said walking to your

 

room to reply to the message. "okay my bunny ^.^ " he sent to you and went to his bed to take a rest. 

 

Byun Hee Min (you) pov

 

You get up off you bed after a few hours of sleep, "its time" you said getting dressed to see your brother. after a few

 

minutes you walked out of the house using a cute dress (the main image at the top). you sat down at the table you

 

always meet with your brother, ordering your drink while looking out the window. hands soon fell apon your eyes

 

"oppa" you said taking the hands off your eyes giving him  a big hug. "you came" she said pinching his cheeks lightly.

 

"of course" he said in a sweet voice giving her a kiss on the cheek and sitting next to her. "oppa i have something to

 

tell you"  you said looking to the floor while playing with your hair, "what is it?" he said  you place your hands  on his

 

and looked to him "oppa, omma and appa want me to move to america with them" he looked at you as his eyes

 

started to get wide "NO!" he said jumping out of his seat. you got up trying to calm him down before he explodes of

 

anger, "oppa stop" you said looking him in the eyes.

 

 

How was this chapter? i did my best but its not that good ): but i hope you guys like it ^^

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DespisedSecret
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