Crushed Dreams and Hidden Potential

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Xiumin is boy who has humongous potential and many dreams.

 

He became a trainee under SM Entertainment to fulfil his potential and live his dreams.

 

But what he received was nothing.

 

Foreword

Hey everyone! I wrote this for the [ d é s e s p o i r ] ❅ Writing Contest by chenyeol and zhangyixing.

 

It's my first time entering a contest for angst so i hope this is okay. Im really not an angst writer but i wanted to try it. ^^

 

So please support me!! I got inspiration from prompt number 4 and from this blog.

 

http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/404781

 

Note: just to let you know, that despite being based upon the blog above, this entire fic is 100% fictional. Though some of what is written may be true, most, if not all, of it has been blown way out of proportion. Just saying.

 

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myungyeolforeternity #1
Chapter 1: it was definitely angsty authornim. i really feel sad now because it sounds quite true..
at least the part about luhan and kai getting all the attention. i dont have anything against them but everyone talks about them all the time...
but then again.. there is always gonna be some members who are more popular than the others........
WHOTFRU #2
Chapter 1: Wow...the fact that this is pretty much true makes me even sadder..XIUMIN HWAITING!
Senpaimnida #3
Chapter 1: Tbh what you wrote may be 100% true.
Sometimes Xiumin seems like a backup dancer, other members overshadow him.

The story of Xiumin's life.
derpcheonsa #4
Chapter 1: ;u; exactly what i feel about him. he had so much potential and that's all he got. i just hope sm will ipen their eyes and get things good for him. T^T
ForeverJjang #5
Chapter 1: This is really good. I like it. I also seem to notice how Xiumin gets easily overshadowed by his other members and that he doesn't have as much fans as compared to Luhan's, Kai's or Lay's. I hope that one day SM will give him a chance to actually let him shine. Haha, anyways, this is a really good angst story and you got the details right.

You're already a good writer so I don't know if I can give you any tips to improve! :)
DragonTopsThePanda #6
Chapter 1: Eh T.T
Ok.... If I ever get to see them live, I'll be holding up an Xiumin poster.
bulgogiyumyum16 #7
It seems really interesting. Please update some more. I want to read his story. Curious here :) thanks!
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