Visual

Description

Title: visual
Rating/Warning: R/angst, open ending you be the judge wether it's character death or not.
Parings: Hinted DaeChan
Word Count: Word says 2,964
Disclaimer: I own the characters not the plot! Wait... that's backwards!
Summary: He was supposed to be the visual.

Foreword

This is dark. I've warned you! It's like some of the other stuff I have on my LiveJournal!

 

The second chapter... not so dark... OTL

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dafujoshi #1
Chapter 2: ASLDASKLDJKLFJLSKJDFLAKSDJLASKDJSKL Himdae himdae himdae.. I ship himdae
IdioticProblems #2
Chapter 2: Poor Himchan ;A; This was really good, I really enjoyed it. I totally just didn't spazz over the HimDae. Nope of course not :P
jinchicken #3
Chapter 2: Actually i do think that way too as well. Sometimes i pity himchan bcos of that fact but he seems okay and happy eventho what he has is just that 'visual' title so I'll just consider that he is happy of what he is. I was going to cry but knowing that daehyun like himchan ya know i mean he's gay and suddenly my tears didnt fall at all. lol but still, nice story! ^^
Park_HyeSun #4
Chapter 2: Yah I didn't know you wrote a second part! Until I stalked the story again, ehehehe. Mmh, Daehyun's confession threw me off but the story is still wonderful to me.

The oneshot version left more impact on me though. ^^ Um, and there's this typo where you wrote 'weather' when you wanted to use the word 'whether'. (:
Park_HyeSun #5
Chapter 1: This story sums up my feelings for Himchan. Truly. Because people have been saying that Daehyun is the real visual and that Himchan has no significant role in B.A.P.

But that's not true! All the members are contributing well and B.A.P is the strong and successful rookie group that we see today. ^^ Nicely written!
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