Chapter 1: It's so cute. I was like reading some parts and then scream into the pillow. (I know I'm crazy) Its just wow so awesome.

Chapter 1: /lies down flat on the floor/ Let me just take a few moments to understand that someone just wrote a decent, present tense based story.

/gets up/ Hi there! Your story is pretty nice. ^^ I'd suggest that you put more tags for this story though. (Unless you did, and my phone didn't show anything ._.) Oh oh, and you had this minor typo. It was the part when Daehyun 'taps' you on the shoulder but you wrote 'tab' I think. OTL. It's one of the earlier paragraphs. ;~;

ZELO IS THE COUSIN, HOW RANDOM AND FUNNY AT THE SAME TIME ADHKFLSK XD ...Okay, I'm done .////.