Donghae and Eunhyuk get Christmas jobs at a department store where they meet. This story follows their lives for 25 days. This story is really long, but hey, at least it's something to keep you lovely people preoccupied.
Chapter 1: I've been reading things all over the place but I haven't been able to review until now, but I'm very happy to say that I recognised this story at one glance and was immediately filled with the love I have for it.
It's a bit cheesy but you wrote it so well that I didn't realise it was until I look back. I really enjoyed reading this one. I loved Donghae having to deal with all of the kids, and then getting to know Eunhyuk. The mistletoe was only an excuse XD
I like that they got to know each other first.
The show was a pleasant surprise. I really like how you wrote it!
I think "pleasurable grunts" should be "pleasured grunts." Donghae would certainly find them pleasurable though ;) The ohs and over again were a little annoying because there were so many. I think two or three would've been fine.
You did a great job with this! I had a great time reading it (oh wait, this probably sounds strange for a s.mut story. I had fun reading it? How can I say this without sounding creepy? XD It was a good read!)
Chapter 1: Aww that was the best Christmas present ever! This fic was filled with adorable fluff, good job! Made me really happy and fluffy inside:-) Merry Christmas!
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