You do need to be descriptive, but just don't put too much because it'll really turn off and bore readers lol. At times, I get confused about the POVs, especially the one with ahjumma, it just seemed insignificant that it were to be written in her POV. Will she appear later in the story too?<br />
The plot is pretty original so to say, but it's stories like these that are really difficult to write, but I have hope you can pull it off :)<br />
Update soon :)<br />
P.S. definitely JaeJoong lol

oh...well that was short...<br />
You need to be a LOT more descriptive. The plot seems...nice.<br />
Keep writing.

@KanashimiAngel okay thanks!mika and Jae look the same?not really...but then again Hoya is my Fav from INFINITE...you should see me fangirling over him haha and the typo I did in chap 2 was meant to be *shop

haha...you know that Mika looks kinda like Jaejoong right?^^ so instead of choosing between those two,I would Hoya to be my bodyguard kkk nice chapter...can't wait next one ^^

@KanashimiAngel okay I will!Thankyou very much~ angelstar4BB fighting!LOL

update soon...this seems interesting ^^