Time Reversal

Description

The screams were deafening, the overpowering chants and cheers for the performing three increasing in volume as the song progressed. The intensity of the room was unbelievable, having an atmosphere that would take your breath away once you take a step in. 

The excitement could not be fulfilled by voice alone.

They resorted to gifts, throwing what they had brought for them onto the stage. They hoped that their bias, or one of the members would pick it up and take it home, treasuring it forever.

One present, a hard clock that presented a rather feminine, though undeniably male, face in the center of it struck someone in the head. 

His name was Jaejoong. His face was on that clock.

And as the hands of the clock spun backwards, winding back in time, so did Jaejoong's mind. Flashbacks just ran through his head until he was stuck in one position.

 

 

 

 

 

Apparently, he had forgotten all but his childhood memories.

Foreword

This is a challenge I recieved from MusicChibi. It's the first challenge that I have accepted on Asianfanfics.com, and so I hope to do my best in it. I had many ideas and events that may take place in the story, and as I was writing it, more idea bunnies jumped into my brain. I'd like to take the time to thank her for the wonderful plot bunny that was handed over me to take care of and nurture.

I accepted the challenge because it's something I have never done before, and it not only allows me to do something for the first time, I can also improve how I change ideas that were given to me to make it my own. My grammar and spelling will also be able to improve. 

Overall, this oneshot was a pleasure to write. It may have taken a few days, and there were probably a few cliche moments in it, but I tried my best to add my own spice in so it would be unique. Once I had an idea in my head for the story, I would add it in as a scene and I think I may have done pretty well in doing so. I tried to make the story flow fluently, and I hope I did a fairly decent job!

I also have absolutely no experience in graphics, be it a background or a poster, and that is why I requested from a rather excellent graphic request shop. My poster was made by BloodyRavens and I think she did a pretty good job in accomplishing what I requested. All in all, this is the longest and the only KPop related oneshot that I have ever written. Hopefully, I'll be able to write more in the future!

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koreankendi #1
This was so cool!!! :)))<br />
I enjoyed this one a lot! Thanks! :)
iheartjae
#2
nice one shot :D
seoulxx
#3
OH MY GOSH one of my favorites ever :DD That was HILARIOUS! You did a great job [:<br />
As for Yoochun, I feel sorry for him xDD
NappeunYeoja #4
Haha^^ nice oneshot
freespiritxj #5
LMFAOO, JUNSU! :D that freaken epic I love it!
a95959 #6
hahha..how cute !<br />
nice one shot !<br />
*subscribe*<br />
:)