No! (Jessica's POV)

Jealousy

24 April 2007

I stepped onto the sidewalk.

CRASH.

I spun around, my heart in my throat. No it couldn’t be. Please, no. No. No!

I knew it before I saw anything. I watched frozen and helpless as my sister’s slender body floated to the ground, like a beautiful leaf falling in an autumn breeze. A fallen leaf – a leaf void of all life. Bright crimson red spotted her simple white dress like a scattering of petals on snow. Lone petals that would soon freeze under the icy grip of falling snow.

No, Krystal, no. You can’t possibly…

NO!

A soundless cry escaped my lips as Krystal’s body laid limp, splayed awkwardly on the hard grey road like a doll that had fallen off its shelf. A broken, ragged doll that can never be mended.

It was too late.

She was gone.

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Va_asianloverz
#1
Chapter 10: share more please
athenacahill #2
Chapter 10: i like this story very much
nycbean #3
Chapter 10: This is sooooooo good. You wrote it really well. Although, each chapter was so short that you actually could've put it all in one chapter as a oneshot^~^
watermelon
#4
Chapter 3: "Why do I keep clinging to that sliver of hope that one day, just one day, she would once again see me as her daughter, Jessica, and not 'the elder sister of Krystal'?"
I like this line the most because it pointed out the difference between the two simple titles.
I wanted to leave it in my bookmarks but I figured it's short so I finished reading it. XD
mylittlelovestory
#5
Beautfully written. Amazing work.