calling roughivge
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Reviewed by zining
Title: [3.5/5]
Good. Well… while not terribly original, and a tad too clique… It lent a favourable image to the story. Good job on that. :D
Good. Well… while not terribly original, and a tad too clique… It lent a favourable image to the story. Good job on that. :D
Foreword & Description: [9/10]
Description: Confusing, but intriguing. A general statement that while did not pull me in, it was enough to let me stay on page. :)
Foreword: Awesome. I LOVED it, especially how you went through all 5 sense and linked ‘feel’ to ‘love’. The sentences are great!
Foreword: Awesome. I LOVED it, especially how you went through all 5 sense and linked ‘feel’ to ‘love’. The sentences are great!
The excerpt had tangible feel, and the last sentence ended well! *thumbs up*
Appearance: [3.5/5]
The poster was nice, and portrayed a sombre, angsty action feel. Kudos!
No background so… no points on that.
Plot: [14/15]
It may be because I’m a total er for action (and historical) fan-fics, but I liked it. Unrealistic, cruel, jam-packed with action and emotion… *squeals *
And… well… it isn’t confusing to me. :P It may be for some other readers, but I’ve got no comment on that. *sticks tongue out*
Originality: [13/15]
Not so original story idea….
BUT!
Original writing style and story setting! Awesome.
Grammar & Punctuations: [19/20]
Seems okay, a well planned story.
Characterization: [8/10]
I loved your characters, detail after detail was fed to me and I loved it. I really felt each character, and that’s GREAT!
Some parts were still rather blurred over though.
Story Flow: [8/10]
The story flow was okay. Kinda confusing at times at first shot but after some thought, not too bad.
I thank the god you didn’t change the character names. They just gave me a headache.
I thank the god you didn’t change the character names. They just gave me a headache.
Overall Enjoyment: [9.5/10]
I wasn’t expecting much from it, I admit. I pushed this review so late for that very reason. I was confused with all the names and everything, and I wasn’t up to reading something not fanfic based. I expected, from reading some past reviews, to be confused and blur throughout. Like reading a sequel without actually understanding the prequel.
In short, I did not have a good impression of your story in the start. But I was wrong.
I LOVED IT. I followed every single chapter, its good, and I’m waiting for more.
In short, I did not have a good impression of your story in the start. But I was wrong.
I LOVED IT. I followed every single chapter, its good, and I’m waiting for more.
Bonus (decided by reviewer): [5/5]
No explanation needed. I’m a total er for action genres & details. You may choose to think that I’m more lenient than usual, but I still mean the words I say. :D
Total: 92.5/105
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