A Moment In Time

Description

A love story started out by mistake.

Moves towards a happy ending.

Then, it all disappeared into thin air.

As if someone turned back the time.

The time when they haven't met each other.

The time when their love did not exist.

Foreword

Betrayed...Abandoned...

I knew the answers and I know the results, but I kept on trying to find a lope hole.

It started out as a mistake, then progress to a happy ending.

But now, it's all GONE.  As if someone turned back the time.

Those feelings, those words, those touch...

One flash of that light and everything I've experienced is gone.

GONE like my love for him and his love for me.................................................................

 

A/N: 

Um...I'm a newbie here.  I'm not a pro at writing, but I'm trying to improve.  ^_^

The characters are original and made up by me.

Please forgive my poor grammar.   :)

Will re-edit later.  ^O^  Comments anyone??? Hehehehe...

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
As I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description
summer-star
#2
Visiting old fics!
summer-star
#3
Visiting old fics!
exoticshawol125 #4
omg it sounds good already!! I'll read chapter 1 now :3
RikatoChan
#5
Chapter 1: I can't believe it! This is what I've been looking for! Hay!
danslapoubelle
#6
Chapter 1: The confusion and jealousy can be felt pounding within the characters' hearts. I can only ask for the story's continuation,
liliamarvel
#7
Aaah... is there going to be an update? Or did you ditch it? It's... intense and powerful....
VIETxBBYxASIAN #8
Wow 0.0 LOVE YOUR VIETLINESS ! <3
misenttram #9
I comment.
interesting storyline and plot.
update soon :D
TuyetHoaTienTu
#10
Yay! 66 views! Aw...no comments? :(