My Light In The Dark

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7-25-10:  I'm currently on a Hitaus.  Sorry to all my readers!  Don't worry, I'll try my best to at least update Ch.2.  I have it written out, just I still have to review it a bit more. ^_^  Thanks for reading and commenting!

Hello, anyone who is reading this.

I'm writing another story again.

Genre: Sad Romance

Don't know if I'll continue with this story or my other stories.

It depends on if I have any supporters out there.

I would appreciate it if there are NO silent readers.

Comments will help others improve, so please do comment.

I really need to improve my writting skills.

I apologize for my mistakes and horrible grammar.  :[

Thanks and enjoy.  :)

Foreword

Prologue:

1st POV

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Accidentally, I was drowned in darkness.

Now, darkness is my only world.

I was afraid in the dark.

There is no light.

There is no hope.

Pain slowly devoured me from the inside out, day by day.

The smile I put on is not for me but for my family.

Hoping to break free, but I knew it was impossible.

I’m still waiting...for a light in my world.

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2nd POV 

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Life is about abuse, greed, and utilizing others.

Abuse left me with painful haunting memories.

Greed causes deaths and could never be cured in this world.

People like taking advantage of others.

Even my own family members and relatives deceived me.

I can trust no one but myself.

The only way to survive through life is to find that right light in this world of darkness.

I’m waiting…for that chance to come for a change.

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Copyrighted. © TuyetHoaTienTu 2010. All rights reserved.
Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of TuyetHoaTienTu.

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summer-star
#1
Visiting old fics!
summer-star
#2
Visiting old fics!
seijin
#3
this is nice...although i did kind of got confused...sorry...anyway...you did a very good job...update soon...
mizanimation #4
omg u have to update soon. i forgot where your story was and tried looking for it and FOUND IT! UPdate soon!
Victorian_Mistress
#5
Update soon!!
mamEngluvhOney
#6
ohhh!! unnie i think its beautiful.. keep it up..
SharShar #7
EEk, I always cry during sad stories, but I can't help it. I think you did a good job making the first chapter! I feel sorry for them already.
mizanimation #8
OMG!
YOUR FOREWORD TOTALLY GOT ME AT "AHN NGYUET?"
This is MY first time reading a Vietnamese story.
I HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON! =]]
coffeePRINCE #9
It was simple, but I found this interesting. :D Update soon.
Victorian_Mistress
#10
I love your foreword! Nice job! I will subscribe to your story. I'm very interested to see what happens! =)