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by aquathunder41 
18 subscribers | 1382 views | Updated Sep 19, 2011 00:43:26 | Created Sep 11, 2011 
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Romeo + Juliet: Untold MBLAQ Story - byunghee joon mblaq mir seungho thunder - main story image

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Characters

Seungho, Thunder, Joon, Mir, G.O and my OC

Description

A modern day retelling of the famous Shakespeare love story, with an action packed twist featuring MBLAQ. Another Seungho x OC fic.

 

Disclaimer: I do NOT own MBLAQ but if I did...well that would be nice now wouldn't it? 
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Action/Romance (plentiful helpings of Comedy and hints of Suspense added in the mix)
Pairing: Seungho/OC (I haven't replaced my OC so it's going to be Alexa for those who have read my 1st fic)
Main Characters: MBLAQ (duh), BEAST, 4 UNNAMED idol groups (for now), and my OC of course
OC Visual Description: Average height/build, fair complexion, layered brunette hair, golden honey colored eyes
Summary/Synopsis: It's going to be a modern day tale of Romeo and Juliet. You can see where this is going can't you? My OC is part of one family while Seungho and the guys are a part of the other family. (i.e. Alexa is Juliet, Seungho is Romeo)

MBLAQ and 2 unnamed idol groups make up the House of Montague (for Romeo) and BEAST plus 2 unnamed idol groups will make up the House of Capulet (for Juliet). BEFORE anyone makes wrong assumptions, I'm a HUGE MBLEAST fan lol I just thought BEAST would be perfect for this story.

So the main thing of the story is the infamous "family feud" just like in Romeo and Juliet. It's what makes Seungho and Alexa's falling in love part complicated. 
So this means Alexa will be family related in some way to one of the BEAST members. Not revealed yet.

The action comes from the two families always trying to kill each other, OBVIOUSLY. Hand-to-hand combat and weapons scenes are going to be a huge factor in this story because A) I love action and 2) my old readers do too apparently.

The feud however, is yet to be revealed because Alexa will find out for herself sometime throughout the story. That's also part of the storyline. Finding a way to resolve the family feud once and for all is going to be the climatic part.

Foreword

Hello everyone ^^

This is the 2nd story I mentioned. It's completed cuz like I said before, I did this like last year. BUT, I'm only gonna post a few chapters at a time for this one. I feel like I'm not getting enough feedback lol.

I already have a bunch of views on my 1st MBLAQ story but like 2 comments. Gotta have more comments. I need to know if you guys like the works or not.

Anywho, onto the story. PLEASE DO NOT PLAGIARIZE.

FANFIC BANNER CREDIT GOES TO YEE XIONG AGAIN <3

 

 

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ddeokbxkkii
#1
These few chapters really helped a lot! I think I'm going to keep coming back to this tutorial whenever I'm stuck! :P Thank you so much!
okinawa
#2
Chapter 1: this is what i needed! i'm trying to work on an action fic but i've never write story in that genre which makes it harder for me. Thanks for making a tutorial/workshop like this ^^
ddeokbxkkii
#3
Chapter 1: Oh I'm stalking this! I'm currently planning a action fic too! Actually the outline, character info everything is more or less out. But I'm going to read this and take some advice. :) Even with just the planning, I actually had a lot of fun with it. Maybe it's because I'm finally really putting this idea of mine down. Because mine is more of a secret agent/double identity kind of thing, I researched more on the system than the weapons.. maybe I'm doing it wrong. I'm still at my planning stage so I'm going to see how this workshop can help me! ^^
Kay_tea114
#4
Oh hi.

Thanks for mentioning my workshop? I'm happy that you found inspiration in my workshop to start your own. Good luck!