The Day Jinki Found A Chicken

Description

 

Jinki is a clumsy, energetic and cheerful 6 years old kid. He loves to explore new places and discovers new things. But then one day, Jinki discovered something. Something new, something intersting, something that made his heartbeat faster.

Chicken.

Foreword

 

 

On a one fine day of November, where the cold have just started to visit the people of Korea, there was a little boy walking down the streets of Seoul.

That little boy name was Lee Jinki.

 

 

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wah.. writing only this made me feel.. like a real auther ;v;

AHHH AM SHO PROUD OF MYSELF!

i acctully won over my laziness and wrote a fanfic!! \(^O^)/

ok so this is my first fanfic >.< its a one shot but please let me know if you liked it or not! :D

also english isnt my first language and i at spelling ._. so iam sorry in advance >.<

ah yeah.. and its kinda random weird one.. so just to let you all know ._.

 

please enjoy reading ^.^

 

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thank you soo much and am really sorry >.<

 
 
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Mahwiii
please ignore this... am just editing it a bit..
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hopelesswriter #1
Chapter 1: lol....Strange Creature...then change name to Chicken...then change to Onew...hey, shoulda keep Strange Creature...xD
i'm not sure if it's intentional or not, but there are many scenes pointing towards the chicken had high possibility of getting cooked...like creating all the mess with Jinki with the poops and all...making him frustrated n wanted revenge....then...'mom likes chicken'...them talking about 'he's hungry'....everytime those scenes made me think n anticipate for the chicken to be cooked....but it's so innocent i don't believe it....you should write sequel of How Jinki's Love for Chicken Turned to the Dark Side....xD....ok, bad idea....this is different than typical onew-chicken story definitely....n it's suitable for children too since it doesn't involve cruelty towards animals...well, that's the first thing i thought....heheh, this is cute...though i'm still not satisfied no 'lesson/revenge' towards the naughty chicken, lol....thanks for sharing~ xD
Byeol980831 #2
Chapter 1: OMG XD
This is sooooo cute!
I laughed a lot XD

I'm sorry but I couldn't imagine Lee Jinki as a kid idk how but I imagined Yoogeun lol

And yes! Going with the flow ish the best XP

It was a fun fiction eomma :* hehe
Wiinween #3
Chapter 1: Kayhhhhhhhh I laugh crazily on my bed :DD but yeahhh this is really cute ^*^ you should write more baby :***** it greats !!!
NYUTAENGS #4
Chapter 1: wow. so cuuute!
leejinkioppa #5
Chapter 1: KYAAHH I LAUGHED ALOT XD hhahahahhhahha very cute umma :D
EXO_Planet88 #6
AWEH that was adorable!! Thank you for telling me to read it, it was adorable!! <333 you should definitely write more :D
leejinkioppa #7
Chapter 1: HAHAHAHHAHA IT WAS SO CUTE XD IT REALLY MADE MY DAY UMMA KYAA ONEW IS SO CLUMSY XD BAHAHAHA <3 HOW CUTE :D oh and i think you meant Busan ^^ either way I really liked it! :) it was a bit random but awesome!!
sujumlover #8
I'm waiting for the fanfic ^^
I hope this is not the only fanfic you will write ^^
leejinkioppa #9
I JUST SUBSCRIBED CX
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