Flying without wings...

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cast:

 

Kim Taerin (you)

Lee Jinki / Onew

and

Kim Hyun Joong

and much more~ 

 

this is written before the     Who is the real "One For Me" ?? 

but I haven't finished both...

but I will finish it soon...someday ^^

 

please be nice to mee^^ into 'Flying Without Wings'

as you know, it's one of Westlife songs... ^o^

 

I changed the title, from 'UNTITLED (yet)

 

would you mind giving me some comments? maybe I will improve my writing skills... although I'm not really good with English, I tried my best! ^^

 

thanks for your attention ^.^

Foreword

Taerin and Onew are mates since they were a kid. Now they’re in Junior High School. At the same school… ^o^

When they 1stcome to the school, they think the school is the worst thing ever. And by the way…. They were suggested by their parents to study there…. But what can they do? nothing! So they think they wont become  famous… but they wrong… and they also think that nobody wants to became friends with them… they don’t want to! They just need to be alone (sorry) Taerin have one brother… An older Brother, named Kim Hyun Joong… and he had some friends too…

 

They didn't know the truth that's deep in their hearts... they love each other... as a friend or more than friends??

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KMLZee #1
Since you want to improve you writing skills I'll read it and say honest words about it, Okay? Here I go.<br />
Uhmm What do you mean by "mates"; Friends maybe classmates? "Come" should be "Came"<br />
",they think the school is the worst thing ever" should be<br />
",they thought the school was the worst thing ever"<br />
There is a bit more mistakes here as well but it seems troublesome to write them down on the comments. You said you're not good at English right? English isn't your first language?
KMLZee #2
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rinda_kim #4
Thanks :) <br />
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The first chapter is posted already... I forgot when<br />
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Did you read it already?
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