A Surprise: Scary or Lovely?

Description

"I don't know. How come I'm here?!"

"What are you?!"

"Holy Cow."

"Eeeek!"

Why in the sane world, does the cheery, calm and composed girl everyone love scream her head off?

She was surprised, yes. But was she frightened? Moved? Excited? Find out by reading on!


This story was featured on {백조} e v a l u a t i o n with a mark of 85/100 by --milkbubbletea

Reviewed by 『ᶠᴵᴺᴰᴵᴺᴳ ᴾᴬᴿᴬᴰᴵˁᴱ』 Shop ☾ and Sehun's Cafe

Entered in Mini Writing Competition

Foreword

My eyes flutter open, and I feel a pair of hands snaking around my waist. I move my eyeballs from side to side, failing to reckon why I am here and glance down to a pair of slender hands, a pair of beautiful pale hands.

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I shriek in shock, as my jaws drop in aghast. The thing before me, the one who causes my heartbeat to be pin-drop silent. The thing smirks to realize I am conscious. A smirk, that horrifies me more than I've ever been in my life.

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This is not good. Not Good, I repeat. I shriek again, even louder than before. How can I not, after what he just said?!

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pilsuk123
#1
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sushi_pilsuk
#2
Chapter 2: this is such a sweet story...at first, it was creepy, then it gets all sweet in the 2nd chapter...nice story^^
Karmablogger
#3
Chapter 2: You got me on the edge of my seat with this story! GOOD GOOD LOVELY JOB
panoramic_paradise
#4
Chapter 2: i slept at 3 am because of this story >.<" It's awesome.
expectations
#5
Chapter 2: DISCSKCJDNE MY BIAS IS NOT MYUNGSOO BUT UNF-- STOP WRECKING MY BIAS LIST YOU PERFECT MONSTER.
-dewdrops
#6
Chapter 2: nice!!!!
I absolutely love it!!!!
^^
MilkyCouple4ever #7
Chapter 2: Wow nice!!