Fankirmee - Love is in the Air
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Title: Love is in the Air
Author: Fankirmee
Reviewer: 4everprocrastinating
Title: 5/5
It was a cute joke and was nice. Not much else to say.
Story Description: 5/15
*sighs* You always love writing descriptions and forewords like this… If anything, since it’s just a one-shot, keep the actual stories description longer than your author note… It didn’t really attract me at all today. The picture plus the one sentence about the story attracted my attention haha.
Storyline and Originality: 19/20
Very fluffy~ I actually thought that Key and Jonghyun would be flying together and that they would fall in love, but turns out they were already dating! That was an interesting turning point.
Flow of the Story: 10/10
It was quick and fast, like a one-shot should be. I was happy that it was kept simple.
Grammar and Layout: 15/15
You have good grammar, which is fine haha. Full points for that one.
Characters: 11/15
Personally, I don’t really like those overly cute personalities you gave them. Other readers will probably like it, but I just didn’t get into that type character, especially when there were two of them haha.
Overall Enjoyment and Extras: 17/20
Eh, it wasn’t my cup of tea, but it was a cute one-shot ^^ I did sort of laugh, thinking they were being a little overdramatic at some points!
Total: 82/100
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