Title: Hey Ugly, I Love You
Author: Jichu--
Reviewer: MikaSykes

Title: 5/5
The title fits perfectly with the story.

Story Description: 12/15
For the most part, the description included the gist of the story. But, it would have been a nice touch to add more details.

Storyline and Originality: 11/20
Frankly, the story was not as original as I would have hoped. It was the basic story of boy meets girl, boy falls in love with girl, and girl denies feelings for boy.

Flow of the Story: 7/10
Gradually, the story moved along. Yet, it does not have enough emotion and detail to have meaning—as of now.

Grammar and Layout: 7/15
The phrasing of sentences and dialogue were mediocre at best. I was constantly confused not only about which character was speaking but what that person was attempting to convey. However, it was nice to add a graphic before scene changes to differentiate between point-of-views.

Characters: 8/15
I felt as though the characters have not developed enough; the characters are just mentioned.

Overall Enjoyment and Extras: 10/20
Overall, it was an alright story. Despite repeatedly reading portions of the story for a complete understanding of it, one thing was clear: The story has promise.

Total: 60/100

MikaSykes': With some fine-tooth editing and a sprinkle of detail, the story would improve a great deal. Good luck, and thank you for requesting =]

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