REVISED!!

Redheads and Cigarettes

Hi guys, so I decided to finally use a review shop, and this, being my most popular fic (although Creative Anatomy has now passed it), was the fic I decided to get reviewed. If you noticed in the foreward, the review I got was not very glowing review, so I decided to revise it. Some of the plot changed a little? I think? I mean, according to the review, I have no plot, so... So yeah, please read it and tell my if it got better or worse or didn't change or if I should just stop writing...

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Dragon63 #1
Chapter 2: this is totally amazing!! i love it so much :D :D :D
thank you so much for writing this :P
Daesunggie #2
Chapter 2: never stop writing just because someone tells you it's not your best. use their critiques as encouragement to keep writing and fonding ways to improve. if you like doing something and it makes you happy, keep at it!
didoe84 #3
Chapter 1: Hey that's not as bad as you seems to think.... honestly I found the pace a little fast but I found the storyline cute!! Thanks for writing & sharing! !!
AryaFlowerny #4
Chapter 1: Ohh, it was sweet, but something is missing... ! It wants ty sequel about Seunghyun's lose of ity xD and why not more Se7en? :D i describe myself as gtop shipper but I am bad girl and i love top7en too xD oh, just imagin hot gtop7en treesome :3
...ehm, sorry XD i didn't want to talk about my fantasies, i just wanted to say that it was cute and sweet :)
AbsoluteHominy #5
Very cute ^^
craisin #6
Chapter 1: HEEHEEHEE
I'M GRINNING LIKE A CHESHIRE CAT AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY
THIS IS SO CUTE AND FLUFFY
aaaaaand I bet I'm your notifications right now *smirks*
Kwon_Jihae #7
Chapter 1: so cuteeee~ >_______<
knitsnknots #8
Chapter 1: Too cute awwww
blossompie #9
Chapter 1: I LOVE THIS FIC
its too cute, im feeling giddy ;3 i want more ;P
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