REVISED!!
Redheads and CigarettesHi guys, so I decided to finally use a review shop, and this, being my most popular fic (although Creative Anatomy has now passed it), was the fic I decided to get reviewed. If you noticed in the foreward, the review I got was not very glowing review, so I decided to revise it. Some of the plot changed a little? I think? I mean, according to the review, I have no plot, so... So yeah, please read it and tell my if it got better or worse or didn't change or if I should just stop writing...
Thanks!
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