Oneshot for himalayancat :)

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Heaven Beside Me

I have a hand, You have the other.
Put them together and We have each other.
Because if we just walk together like this...
Wherever we go, it'll be heaven...  
 

  

 

 

Foreword

 

This oneshot is dedicated to one of the best authors here in aff (I'm serious), himalayancat :D It's an honor to have you in my contest back then. I really look up to you! Sorry if this took too long to be published though...

Anyways, I have Seohyun, Sulli, Suho and Sehun (Lol, lots of S there) as my main cast. No one's an antagonist or a protagonist. Hmm, they all share equal parts here...so yeah. Oh and yeah, there will be a lot of different relationships here : siblings, senior-junior, tutor-tutee, rivals, two lovers (Obviously :P)...Whoever got it all right, will have a reward from me!

Settings will be on school. And since I still haven't put a plot, the lines on my description are somewhat, enough <3 

Clue: SeoSul, SeoHun, SeoHo, SeSul, SuHun, SulHo

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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sone_for3v3r #1
Chapter 1: I liked this :) no 'biasness' or anything XD It usually happens in stories..

Please update soon!!!
himalayancat #2
Chapter 1: Nice story :)
I think this is the first time I stumble upon a plot like this here in AFF. At first I thought it would be an actual love square but when I reached the middle I kind of grasped the idea that it was actually a misunderstanding in Sulli's part. It is a bit predictable after I read halfway but it wasn't exactly what I have in mind when I first read it. Does that make sense? I dunno. *scratch head and blush*
Well, please ignore my rambling. Overall, I love it. The opening scene is beautiful and how you used the third person's POV but still looking through each characters is great. I've always love this way of writing much much more than those stories where they use first person's point of view and change POVs in the story. Your transition from one character to another is really smooth, I totally love it. I'm planning to try this kind of style for one of my ongoing stories as well, and I hope I can make it smooth too.
The characters are cute too: jealous-Sulli, overprotective-Seohyun, Love-strucked-Sehunnie, and wise-Suho gramps.
*yes, he is a grandpa. I just have to add that. I'm sorry Junmen bb. *
Thank you for the story. I feel honored. :)
Farys_Sya #3
Chapter 1: I DON T SHIP SEOHO I PREFER SEOLHO. ACTUALLY I DON T LIKE SEOHYUN BUT, NICE STORY.
_corgibutts #4
Chapter 1: nice ! there isnt much seoho fic :) continue and write more !
-reflection #5
Chapter 1: *prev comment*
I'm so sorry... It's my cousin who wrote that.... ~.~"
-reflection #6
Chapter 1: I DEMAND SEOHO!!! I don't want Sulli interfering with them... Ihatehersomuchhere.... I don't want her with SeHun too.....
Update soon!! Please, SeoHooooo... No Sulli interference...
Fashionistae #7
Chapter 1: seems nice
uizt143 #8
SeoHun and SulHo pleeeaassseeeee. Kekeke. ^^v
himalayancat #9
Omoooooooo.......
Thank youuuuu... T-T
I'm very-very-very flattered T_T
I'm sorry I've just seen it now. T_T
The desc and foreword sounds promising and I love the cast. XD
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