Chapter 1

The Horrors of Love

Bom POV

"Corn!!!" I screamed. I looked at the bag of corn Chaerin was holding. I was gonna jump for the bag but Chaerin held it out of my reach.

"Unnie, I'll only give you the corn if you look after Gaho for me while me and Ji goes out. PLEASSSEEE!!" Chaerin begged.

"Aishhh! Fine! Now give me the corn!" I said. When Chaerin gave me the bag, I immediently opened it and started munching on some corn.

"Bommie Unnie!! Can you look after Boss as well? Me and Bae wanted to go out as well," Dara said.

"Yah! Santokki! What am I?! A dog sitter?!!"I said. But Dara kept giving me the puppy eyes. Aigoo! I eventually gave in.

"Unnie, do you want some help with Boss and Gaho?" Minji asked.

" Aniyo. I can manage. Why don't you and Daesung do something together instead?" I said, as I walked out of the living room and into my bedroom. Ever since CL and Dara got boyfriends and Minji in love with Daesung, I have nothing to do at all! TT_TT I might as well end up as an old single woman who has lots of cats!

But then as soon as I started drift into my alien world, I recieved a text message.

Bommie, do you want to meet up on Saturday at the mall? - Siwon

Hmmm, should I go? The girls might get suspicious. Omo! What if they find out?! But I need to go. :/

OK! - Me

I'll pick u up at 3pm. B ready by then, k? :) - Siwon

Yuppp! C u there! :D - Me

Right. Now I have to sneak out of the house without being noticed. -.- Thats going to be tough. These girls are so nosy! Should I tell them to go out with their boyfriends while I stay home? But then I will need to dogsit Gaho and Boss. Oh well, I'll tell Seungri to do it instead. Kekeke I'm a genius! Oh Gosh, tonight I have to dogsit Gaho and Boss. Last time I looked after them, Gaho peed on my rug and Boss bit my nose. >.<

Anyways, whats so hard about looking after 2 dogs! Any idiot could do that!

 

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BeautifulStranger21
#1
Chapter 7: Ahhh it all keeps getting complicated. XD I love the mystery factor. Your writing style is good, but as I previously said it'd be better if you describe facial expressions, atmosphere and the surrounding area. ^^ I hate leaving short comments saying "great, update plz" but since the chapters are short it leaves me no choice. XD
I'm looking forward to the new chapter, keep going! <3
BeautifulStranger21
#2
Chapter 6: Aigoo! ;A; This keeps getting more and MORE interesting!! What did TOP lie about? Why did he lie? Why does he hate Siwon? So many questions wandering around in my head. XD
Update soon! And please try to make the chapters longer, they're really short so I don't get to enjoy the beauty of the plot as much. Please keep going! <3
BeautifulStranger21
#3
Chapter 5: I love it! The plot is interesting and the characters are perfect.
However, I think it would be better if you describe the places, facial expressions and appearances more, and even the way they talk. And Bom calling TOP & Siwon 'Oppa' kinda puts it off for me, because they're actually younger than her, she should call them 'saeng'. If you wanted her to call the guy oppa, I think you should have used Leetuek, Heechul or Se7en. ^^ Since they're my favorites from Bom's oppas list keke! XD

Anyway please update soon! I can't wait to find out why TOP is dragging her out of the house!
nessadin0
#4
Chapter 4: Oh man I'm scared for Bom. Wonder what Chaerin has in plan for her. Kekeke
starmonkey #5
Chapter 2: Update pls authornim!