The Horrors of Love

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"Arghhhhh!Don't kill me!"

BANG!

I turned my head and saw blood everywhere. What's happening?! What should I do? Run?

But then I turned and saw a man holding a gun.

BANG!

My head suddenly turned pitch black.

Foreword

Annyeong~! This is my first fanfic and I hope you will enjoy it! :) If I make any errors please point it out to me, so I can make the story better! Lets be friends, kay? :D Please take care of me! Kamnsamida~! ;D

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BeautifulStranger21 #1
Chapter 7: Ahhh it all keeps getting complicated. XD I love the mystery factor. Your writing style is good, but as I previously said it'd be better if you describe facial expressions, atmosphere and the surrounding area. ^^ I hate leaving short comments saying "great, update plz" but since the chapters are short it leaves me no choice. XD
I'm looking forward to the new chapter, keep going! <3
BeautifulStranger21 #2
Chapter 6: Aigoo! ;A; This keeps getting more and MORE interesting!! What did TOP lie about? Why did he lie? Why does he hate Siwon? So many questions wandering around in my head. XD
Update soon! And please try to make the chapters longer, they're really short so I don't get to enjoy the beauty of the plot as much. Please keep going! <3
BeautifulStranger21 #3
Chapter 5: I love it! The plot is interesting and the characters are perfect.
However, I think it would be better if you describe the places, facial expressions and appearances more, and even the way they talk. And Bom calling TOP & Siwon 'Oppa' kinda puts it off for me, because they're actually younger than her, she should call them 'saeng'. If you wanted her to call the guy oppa, I think you should have used Leetuek, Heechul or Se7en. ^^ Since they're my favorites from Bom's oppas list keke! XD

Anyway please update soon! I can't wait to find out why TOP is dragging her out of the house!
nessadin0 #4
Chapter 4: Oh man I'm scared for Bom. Wonder what Chaerin has in plan for her. Kekeke
starmonkey #5
Chapter 2: Update pls authornim!
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