Lost and Found

Description

Luna knows there are magical creatures that exist in their world as she's already met one in the guise of a sylph.  That being said she can't help but want to believe Yesung's claim there is a unicorn in the forest behind Henry's house, as unlikely as it sounds.  Completely unprepared, she sets off into the forest and promptly finds herself quite lost.  Will she find the unicorn she wants to see so badly or return home, if she can find it, the worse for wear?

Foreword

This one shot is sort of a dedication to fxhalo and a spin off to They Walk Among Us.  Set in the same universe, Lay is not featured in that fic but he does work well in this one so I hope you enjoy.

Author's Thoughts
Amalya
Damn...there goes my story picture. -_-
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Frosty_Maiden #1
Chapter 1: OMG, cute and fluffy overload. I both cringed and squealed at points.
Fluff is not my forte but I do love how child-like and fairy tale this seemed.
Your writing seemed so different from the other things I have read so far.
I love how Luna seems so young, and so innocent and nieve. The whole story has this awesome innocence about it. Its very Disney if you get what I mean.
Sweet, tender and totally magical.
I couldn't take the unicorn seriously, I kept imagining it was going to give a y snort or something here and there LOL.
Talking of which, how on earth does a unicorn laugh?? I have no idea. I like the descriptions again, like the way the unicorn felt as Luna rode it etc. The forest and the scenery was perfect. <3

One thing I have to mention though is that you mentioned his silken mane a lot...it just reminded me of the tiwlight books; I mean in them the author basically went on about Edwards amber eyes in various ways...but it was the same statement over and over again in reality.
Anyway, what I am trying to say is, that even though you were not anywhere near as flowery as Stephanie Mayer, I did feel a slight prick of concern at the way you were heading.

However, this was really interesting to read from you. Nice compact one-shot too. I'm glad you managed to limit yourself and not overwhelm the reader.
Plus I enjoyed seeing a new side of your ability :)
PureBride #2
Chapter 1: This is sooo cute cx you make me squel a lot while reading this! And I was able to imagine every single detail thanks to your wonderfully written descriptions :)
I also love the way you protrayed Luna and Lay. Their reaction is adorable! Thank you very very much for writing this. It is definitely one of my fav one shots <3
AngelWithAShotgun #3
Chapter 1: This is so damn beautiful :') its so hard to find a Lay-Luna fic around here and this is like a gift so beautiful~
JustFei #4
Chapter 1: asdfghjkllljghjfdjd CUTE!
takenbyonew #5
Chapter 1: WAAAAAAAAH so cute omg
ParkMiyoung #6
Chapter 1: Oh my :) that was sooo cute! And really cool. You really write beautiful <3
SMNoel189 #7
Chapter 1: Oh my god this is too much for me too handle!!! I love your plot! Well, it's like a side story of 'They walk among us' but still!! Make more Luna oneshots! Now, excuse me while i go spazz like an idiot
TheLaughableOne #8
Chapter 1: this is sooo cute XD
I love the detail in this story
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