Less subtle
Not shaded with darkness
But plainly adorable
In this, I saw your softest side
...I also believe in angels

Chapter 6: Honestly, I think the fic has a lot of potential. Aside from being refreshing, your plot had given you a chance to explore the emotional dimensions of your characters. Though, I have some criticism in your world-building. You haven’t clearly emphasized the state of being apocalyptic of world in your story. World-building wise, I haven’t seen the whole picture in my mind. And no, you didn’t fail with the describing the scene, okay? I just feel you failed to emphasize to emotional chaos the apocalypse in your world brought to the character.

Your plot is good. It’s new and quite refreshing. But the thing is you had given a chance to explore the emotional dimensions of your characters you didn’t take that chance. If only you could have made me cry. I guess I was expecting a lot since your writing style is quite impressive to look at. I’m not saying it was not good okay? Just saying that it could have been better.

I particularly loved the scene between Man and Jaejeong, I swear I could only smile at the part. Good job at the diversity of their conversation. It felt real.

The insertion of Jaejong’s past is quite confusing. I don’t know why but I had to read it twice to understand. But maybe it was my bad. Hehe. Or maybe that was your intention since Cyndi was having a psychological problem in here and you wanted your readers to be as confused as she is. Good job if you aim for the later. ^^

Hmmm... the last chapter tho~ it didn’t had an impact. Only to me, of course. But was just my opinion. And im pretty honest, you could see that right?
I hope I see more of your works in the future! Thank you author-nim! See you when I see you.

Chapter 6: Hi! to the author of this story, it's my first time to read your work, and I like your writing style. Even though there were some typo's wherein I've got confused (sometimes), I'm still impressed because it's an atypical story and I didn't get bored and got amazed on what happened next esp. the last part... well I didn't really expect that would be the ending. :) so, yeah all in all, thumbs up! great story you've got here keep it up! ^_^