Chapter Three

One Soul




































ONE SOUL
ONE SOUL










AN ANGEL'S SOUL, I SHARE


How is it possible to lose one's soul? the angel asked his maker.

When the soul is forced out of the body before its time. 

What happened to that child?

Her soul could not cope with the abuse her physical body endured. It escaped with no definite place to go.

How can I help her?

We have called upon you for that reason but do you truly wish to help this child?

Yes.

Why?

I'm not sure why.

A clean slate. Souls like yours tend to forget their past life because they do not wish to remember. Perhaps while helping this child, you will find something to fill that emptiness inside. 

Where do I begin?

The heavens have mended her mind and body but without a soul, she cannot exist. Do you understand now?

Yes—to share my soul.

And only yours will do. But you must not forget to quickly find her soul for two minds cannot share one soul indefinitely.



Mana's eyes opened. She felt oddly different and yet the same. While sitting up, she looked at her hands and feet. Did they belong to her? She wiggled her little fingers and felt her toes move. They sure were. Mana looked up to see the trees full of leaves. But wasn't it winter? Blue skies. Leafy trees. Where was this place? She must have fallen asleep. Mana felt the green grass with her hands. The nice cool tingling sensation made her giggle and it woke the handsome stranger beside her. He blinked as Mana leaned over to take a closer look. She noticed they shared the same deep indigo colored eyes. Mana had seen it many times before in the mirror while brushing her teeth like a good girl.

Suprisingly unafraid, she reached out to touch his soft brown hair. The strange man sat straight up and lifted her to one side.

"Are you an angel?"

"Uhh—something like that. Why?"

"I knew. Because Mommy said that angels will watch over me when she isn't around. So I shouldn't do anything bad like stepping on ants but I wouldn't do it anyways because they will climb up my shoe and bite me."

"I see." The man rubbed his eyes. "We should go find your mommy and daddy."

"Adam isn't my real daddy. I only call him daddy because it makes mommy happy."

"So he's your step-dad?"

"I don't know. I just call Adam 'daddy' but I know for sure he isn't my real daddy because I saw my real daddy once in my dream. He is handsome. More handsome than Adam."

"Oh really? Very handsome? How about me?"

"You're the same as my real daddy." Her wide innocent smile was contagious. She was incredibly adorable but what was her name?

"My name is Mana Kim. What is yours?"

"Wellit seems I don't really have one."

"Oh oh! Can I call you Mr. Curly Bear? Please? Your hair is soft like Mr. Curly Bear's."

"You can call me whatever you like, sweetheart. Let's go find mommy and Adam. They must be worried sick about you."

"But mommy said not to follow strangers."

"How can I be a stranger when I'm your guardian angel friend, Mr. Curly Bear?"

"Oh that's true."

Mr. Curly Bear held out his hand to Mana and she latched onto it happily.

"But how will we find mommy and Adam? I tried to go home but I just get lost."

"Don't worry. I'm not an angel for nothing. I know exactly where mommy is. Do you want to go there first?"

"Yes please. I miss her very much."

As Mr. Curly Bear held Mana's little hand, a special bond formed. It was not only a soul they both shared. Their bond was blood deep.

"I hear your mommy is searching very hard for your soul."

"My soul?"

"Yes, your very own soul."

"But what is a soul?"

"Well—I'm not very sure but I know you can't exist without one."

"But I'm here with you now."

"That's because you're sharing my soul."

"Does that mean I'm part of you? But Mana is Mana and Mr. Curly Bear is Mr. Curly Bear."

"And because you're Mana and I'm Mr. Curly Bear, we have to find your soul soon."

"What happens if Mana's very own soul is super good at playing hide and seek? Will Mana disappear?"

"That won't happen. We will find your soul and Mana, mommy, and Adam will live happily ever after."

"With Mr. Curly Bear too!"

"Yes, with Mr. Curly Bear too—"

"But I think mommy will be very sad if Mana disappeared. Mana will be sad too."

"Mr. Curly Bear will be sad too. So let's not make anyone sad, okay?"

"Okay."









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gelle1221 #1
Less subtle
Not shaded with darkness
But plainly adorable
In this, I saw your softest side
...I also believe in angels
dancingpasta
#2
Chapter 6: Honestly, I think the fic has a lot of potential. Aside from being refreshing, your plot had given you a chance to explore the emotional dimensions of your characters. Though, I have some criticism in your world-building. You haven’t clearly emphasized the state of being apocalyptic of world in your story. World-building wise, I haven’t seen the whole picture in my mind. And no, you didn’t fail with the describing the scene, okay? I just feel you failed to emphasize to emotional chaos the apocalypse in your world brought to the character.

Your plot is good. It’s new and quite refreshing. But the thing is you had given a chance to explore the emotional dimensions of your characters you didn’t take that chance. If only you could have made me cry. I guess I was expecting a lot since your writing style is quite impressive to look at. I’m not saying it was not good okay? Just saying that it could have been better.

I particularly loved the scene between Man and Jaejeong, I swear I could only smile at the part. Good job at the diversity of their conversation. It felt real.

The insertion of Jaejong’s past is quite confusing. I don’t know why but I had to read it twice to understand. But maybe it was my bad. Hehe. Or maybe that was your intention since Cyndi was having a psychological problem in here and you wanted your readers to be as confused as she is. Good job if you aim for the later. ^^

Hmmm... the last chapter tho~ it didn’t had an impact. Only to me, of course. But was just my opinion. And im pretty honest, you could see that right?
I hope I see more of your works in the future! Thank you author-nim! See you when I see you.
april_03
#3
Chapter 6: Hi! to the author of this story, it's my first time to read your work, and I like your writing style. Even though there were some typo's wherein I've got confused (sometimes), I'm still impressed because it's an atypical story and I didn't get bored and got amazed on what happened next esp. the last part... well I didn't really expect that would be the ending. :) so, yeah all in all, thumbs up! great story you've got here keep it up! ^_^