Hansel and Gretel

Description

Okay so i wrote this when i was bored..I was actually like..REALLY BORED!

Btw i got the idea from the korean movie Hansel and Gretel too xD

Foreword

 This is a story about two young boys.
One named Ren, who was as pretty as a Japanese cherry blossom tree in Mid-Spring and as white skinned as Snow White. Yes, it was a him—a he— a boy but he was still beautiful. But even though he was pretty, Ren was a really cold person (in the outside) and he did not trust anyone. He lived with his adoptive father in a forest  that no one knew about  . Ren  couldn’t wait to leave. The other was called Baekho. He was really manly and a little too optimistic. He was really caring but whatsoever a little clueless about understanding other people’s feelings. One day Baekho had a car accident on his way to his friend's house . Baekho had been on the phone when he noticed a little creature on the road . While trying to ivade it , his car rolled of the road into the forest and he woke up in Ren's home.
BAEKHO POV:
I was awakened by sunlight. I covered my face with my hand as for not to get blinded by the light. I looked around and stood up. Where was I?

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WeSmokeDreams #1
Chapter 2: Oww, this was a surprisingly sweet story!^3^ most of the time i was on the edge, thinking the old man would pop out of nowhere and kill them with an axe...now that i type it, it looks kinda stupid...=3=' but anyway, i am overly grateful for the fluffy ending.^^
Thanks for sharing and have a nice time.^^ /
sHinerenzu #2
Chapter 2: Nice story ^^. at first I was afraid of what will happen to Ren after he left the forest. I'm glad that only everything that related to his past was gone, not including him (or he being old suddenly).
Hm...I wonder what made the old man died XP
XXNuestRenXXlurves
#3
Chapter 2: Nice! =)
EndorseAllLove
#4
Chapter 2: Cool! When i read the title i thought 'the fairytale' but then i read the foreword and had an epic spasm!
I totally love that movie ashdghsdgdhsf THANK YOU <3
haha baekho is such a man child