The Irreversible Beguilement

Description

Sandara loves Seung Hyun, just as much as he loves her.
 
She loves everything about him, his good and bad points.
 
Except one thing she could not stand: his attachment to his mother.
 
Despite this minor aspect, Dara walks up the aisle after three years of serious dating; hoping he would become more independent.
 
Six months into their marriage, she falls pregnant and as they plan the future together, she makes two requests to him:
 
One, under no circumstances, is his mother coming the birthing room while she is having their baby.
Two, he is to turn his phone off the moment she gets into active labour.
 
She knows that his mother would call him during the labour to ask about the situation, but Sandara doesn't want his attention to be diverted.
 
Seung Hyun agrees to her requests, but can he really keep his promise?
 

Title: The Irreversible Beguilement.

Word Count: 5,050 words. (was 5,000 words at the due date of the contest, but changed after editing after the winner was announced)

Pairings: TabiSan [main].

Author's Notes:

  • There are two meanings of  beguilement:
  1. To deceive; cheat; mislead.
  2. To charm; bewitch.

Foreword

This is an entry to Scibbbbler & ann_the_insomniac's Fantastic Writing Contest Fall 2012 using the theme of betrayal.


Credit

 

Poster: iheartyou987 from Abundant Felicity Designs & Reviews.

Review: pandoraSV13 from Clockwork Reviews and Tutorials.

Tantk11
Se Hun comes from SEung HyUN. I can't use Sang Hyun (SAndara & seuNG HYUN) as that's Dara's brother's name xD

Comments

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kapoyani #1
Chapter 5: if he cant have the guts to stick up or back her up then damn it might be petty but cutting it quick instead of bearing a pushover hubby of a mommas boy for years ... hmmm a divorce seems drastic i hope she gives him another chance to know the boundaries and grow a spine when it comes to her
msdeathstalker #2
Chapter 5: ommo the ending! :( thanks
MissTangerine
#3
Chapter 5: Saw your story being reviewed in Clockwork...and I just had to check it.

I'm actually quite satisfied on how the story ended. IDK, I really liked it. This deserves more views...
sleepylips #4
this is the story that I go - WTF!???! O_O
xara10
#5
Chapter 5: although its a sad ending, i still believe that betrayal is something that can ruin once happy couple that's why she decided to end their marriage cos for sure tabi will still do it all over again since she's a mama's boy. i mean i dont hate guys who are mama's boy but they should know their boundaries also esp. when you are married already. thank you so much. looking forward for more.
bangsstory
#6
Chapter 5: I 'kind of' like that it's ending without a happy ending or the I-forgive-you-just-don't-do-it-again situation though I believe every person deserves a second chance. Bringing his mother despite their initial discussions and his agreement with the setup shows his (GHAD! I FORGOT THE WORD!... GRRRR! *pulls at hair*) AH! His lack of resolve! Though maayyybeee divorce was too much(?), what would he do with more serious situations? Just let his mom decide for him or lead him on? That's a definite turn-off.
bangsstory
#7
Chapter 4: HOMG. HOMG. HOMG. The uninvited. O_O
xara10
#8
Chapter 3: OMG seunghyun, why did you disobey dara??? aigoo i want to know what will happen next, damn tabi is mama's boy here. thanks for the update.
TabiSan4eva
#9
ahahaha..I don't know but..reading the description made me feel excited for this to begin..I wonder how this type of relationship works out..It's very far from the Dara who we know for being a loving daughter to her mother..and LOL at her orders to Tabi..I wonder if Tabi can make it...hahaahaha..Hope for this to start..
iheart2ne1dara #10
wow. Interesting story!