The Dragon's Den Review Shop

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Okay, let's see if this takes THIS time around. >_<

 

Annyeong!! Welcome to The Dragon's Den Review Shop! This review shop is rather unique, in that I do not use rubrics. Instead, as a novelist who has taken WAY too many writing and critiquing courses, I prefer to do more in-depth reviews. (I know your next question, and I haven't heard back from the all the agents yet. >_< I'm getting a nice collection of 'It's good, but not what we're looking for at this time' letters, though.) I'm rather serious about writing, and so every story I review will have constructive criticism. I will also review original work, if requested. 

Foreword

About me:

Name: Kaileia

Age: 30

Occupation: University student, currently.

Native Language: English

Genres I Write: Mostly general fiction, falling into the sub-genres of action/adventure and psychological thriller. However, I also have a Young Adult novel and a Fantasy novel in the works.

Genres I Read: Everything.

Do I read ? Yes.

 

Rules:

I really don't have many.

1. Please respect everyone. This shouldn't have to be a rule, but I've seen some disrespect, so I'm just making sure you know.

2. Please subscribe. You will need to know when your review is ready.

3. Please don't rush me. I work this alone at the moment, and that's along with 15 credit hours, three Asian language classes, and my own fanfiction. However, I do read quickly, so just give me time.

That's it.

 

Review Request:

Author name:

Story title:

Story link:

Is English your native language? (Just so I'm not evil with grammar and spelling)

Constructive criticism or general opinion? (Constructive criticism will have me going into your use of words and punctuation, the flow of the story, the realism of the plot, character development, and ease of reading for general audiences. General opinion is the usual: Does it flow, is it interesting, are the characters relatable, and Is this something I would continue reading.)

 

That's all there is to it, ladies and gentlemen. Just toss your review request in the comments section, subscribe, and you're good to go. ^_^

Comments

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turtlepanda22 #1
im wondering, do u have a rule about the story's length? nd do u review also on the appearance or is it just the content?
perfect_shinee
#2
Review Request:

Author name: perfect_shinee

Story title: Since Then...

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/358511/since-then-death-drama-mblaq-romance-shinee-ukiss-regret

Is English your native language? yup :D

Constructive criticism or general opinion? Constructive Criticism please ~
deliberatemistake
#3
Review Request:

Author name:deliberatemistake

Story title: Fettered by Time

Story link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/326556/fettered-by-time-fantasy-myungsoo-sungjong

Is English your native language? Nope.
Constructive criticism or general opinion? Constructive criticism please.
shy_rabbit
#4
:
Author name: shy_rabbit

Story title: strawberry ice-cream

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/316232/strawberry-ice-cream-romance-you-jongup-bap-daehyun-bapandyou

Is English your native language? yep

Constructive criticism or general opinion? critisism plz
MissyKuromie
#5
Review Request:

Author name: MissyKuromie

Story title: White World

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/218346

Is English your native language? Yes

Constructive criticism or general opinion? Constructive please! This sounds like the perfect review shop for me. Don't be afraid to really go in and point out plot holes or mistakes or anything like that, I can take it! Be as harsh as you like, I want a real opinion :)
FxGenerationLover
#6
Author name: FxGenerationLover

Story title: Tiffany

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/263991

Is English your native language? No, but it's my second language :)

Constructive criticism or general opinion? Constructive criticism please~ I really want to improve ^^ thank you:3