The Feeding Dark

Description

The Underground was a place no one dared to venture willingly. There were stories. Those who tried to debunk the stories were never seen again. No one went willingly, but The Underground had a way of finding people. The posters of the missing covered the outside of the police stations. 

Five men whose lives had never touched before find themselves pulled into The Underground. Can they find their way out, or will they fall prey to the feeding dark?

Foreword

Taemin slowed down. He no longer heard the footsteps behind him. Leaning against a wall, he caught his breath. His eyes hadn't quite adjusted to the dimness, so he waited until they did. He looked behind him, but there was no sign of the muggers. He let out a sigh before slowly working his way back the way he had come.

After a few minutes, he frowned. This was the way he had taken, he was sure of it, but it was...different now. There had been a sharp corner, but now, the hallway just seemed to stretch on. He slowed, but continued forward. After a minute, the hallway opened up into a larger space. He heard splashing and looked down, surprised to find a couple inches of water on the floor. Stopping, he looked around, his eyes widening as he realized where he was.

"The Underground..."

 

 

 

[Absolute, undying LOVE for Sulliviera and the Snowdrop Request Shop for the poster and background!!!!! <3]

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Itmedatboi #1
Chapter 6: Don't force yourself :)! Your mental and physical health are way more important than a meagre story :)
DragonTales
#2
Chapter 6: Hi! This story is amazingly well written and thought through and the plot is really exciting! I'm all jittery about this and I'm glad you feel better now :) I had similar issues some years ago and I know how hard it is to get yourself back on track, to get yourself in General back. Like your passion for things you used to love and stuff. I'm really glad you're at that stage now and I have my fingers crossed for you :) Good work and again, I really love this story so far :) xx
cha_tae #3
"world hardened cops attempting their best aegyo on him." <= xDD
Really cool how all the SuJu guys have their individual talents in the squad. ^^
Really scary how the figure who "took" Jinki is human shaped! O_O
Great update! Can't wait for the next! :D
sulliviera #4
waa it's suju.. lol XD aigoo jonghyun's character is very intersting~! unnie.. update soon~! lol xD
Ashyunchick20 #5
Hello hello! ~ Shinee dance ~:P
I was wondering if you can check out my fanfic about Shinee!~ :D
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/128896/flower-boys-nerd-jonghyun-key-minho-onew-romance-shinee-taemin
Thanks!~ ^_^
cha_tae #6
This sounds like it's gonna be AHMAYZINGGG!! Please continue!! ^^
sulliviera #7
hohoho~~! i've got the 1st chappy~! NICE UNNIE! can't wait to see the next one~! ^^ it's JINKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lauriieomma
#8
haha when you put hallway i thought of the department of mysterys from Harry Potter! and now that's all i see when i read it! anyway it sounds awesome! update soon! :3
sulliviera #9
UNNIE!! GIVE ME THE FIRST CHAPTER!!!!!! >.< lol XD
persona-x #10
^^ nice