Summer House

Description

What do you get when you put 5 foreign girls in a house with a Visual Kei group for the summer? Well for Nikki and her 4 friends they know exactly how that's like.

HEY everyone well Idk if this story is going to be fail but it never hurts to try right but yeah I'll have my first chapter up tomorrow :)

 

Character: NIkki Mason

Age:22

Personality:Fun,Nice,Loving,Peppy,Mean(when she needs to be)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Character: Cheyla Merrick

Age:22

Personality:Funny,Peppy,Protective,Nice,Mean(when she needs to be)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Character:Ali Carter

Age:22

Personality: Bright,Nice,Smart,Shy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Character: Melanie Kyoto

Age: 22

Personality:Loveable,Shy,Loving,Nice,Sweet

 

Character: Kaloni Woods

Age:22

Personality:Nice,Bright,Smart,Funny,

 

 

 

 

Foreword

And this is how the summer starts........

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mizukitakuri #1
Chapter 2: like the story but could you organize the sentences in a way the its not so long and chuncky, and also use more punctuations (eg " for someone's speach) instead of running the sentences? cos its really confusing and hard to read when all the words are cluttered together like this, i dont know whose talking about what at any point of time >< thanks :)