Chapter 1: Hello~!^^ I think that considering this is your first one shot, it's actually pretty good. Are you going to name the characters? With more details about the characters, it would be better, take their names for example^^. The plot is alright,Angst is actually my most preferred genre^^. I hope with improvement, you'll be writing more fics~! Good job ;3
Omo ! Why :(:( <br />
This is a really sweet oneshot :) I love it. <br />
But...WHY DIE T__T I didnt even see it coming<br />
Whatever, I still love it ^_^
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