Missed

Words Beyond Words

 

Last night I felt you there with me

At first I thought I was going crazy

And then I realized it was probably true

Only because I was and am deeply missing you

For people to see what I'm feeling is easy

But for them to understand it is impossible sadly

If you're wondering who it is that I am speaking of

It is someone quite dear to me, someone I love.

His name is forever in my heart, his name is Edit

Maybe he would be ok if his father just gave him a little credit.

I just hope he knows he will be missed

Especially by his lover named Chris

 

 

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Explanation: This was.. It's still a hard subject to talk about for me sometimes but this was about someone who was special to me, Edit, and the other name mentioned, Chris, they are both special to me and always will be. This poem was written as a memory of Edit who died on 5-10-2012 on the day he turned 20. There were three people who mainly loved and cared for him a lot and still miss him.... Chris, Najim, Me... That is in no certain order of course.

 

 

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Author's Note: Some scars never heal in life but you learn to just be appreciative towards them because they make you a stronger person over time. Anyways, please don't forget to Subscribe and Comment! 

Peace and Love, BlytheForever12

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4ranghae
#1
Chapter 32: i love reading your poems, even if they show your struggles they prove you dealt with them....
i feel like getting into poetry now ^^
4ranghae
#2
Chapter 2: as long as you and your friend are okay ^^ your poetry really nice to read... sadly i can realate to a lot of it... T^T
nalgaewings #3
Chapter 32: I read everything :] I'm caught up haha. I love your poems cause they say something. Stay strong!
nalgaewings #4
Chapter 27: For this poem... I just wanted to let you know that taking your life is not going to solve any problems or make any one person more happy. If you think that leaving is going to make one person happy, what about all the other people that actually care for you? You'd hurt them as well... Dying is never the way to solve anything. I hope you feel loved <3 The people that are reading your works are giving it to you. I hope you feel it and get well soon <3
SullHeeSn0w
#5
i love poetry and your poetry is daebak...
please be well soon...
^^...
nalgaewings #6
Chapter 20: I like that school poem! XD Way to stand up to your teacher. Boss xD
Marianations #7
Guys, the author of this story has tried to commit suicide. PLease, don't unsubscribe or say harsh things to her. Thank you.
Snuggles
#8
Chapter 11: Awwww~ You're very good at poems~! I love this already!
sweet_mintx
#9
Chapter 32: Hey, I'm a big poetry person, and I've been reading through many of your poems! The themes are great, the writing is amazing, and I'm super happy you've decided to write this sort of story on AFF. Sure, AFF is a site for fanfiction, but in my personal opinion, it's a site for all kinds of writing, for budding writers, and for non-judgemental friendship. Keep up the good work, the poems are great.