Crimson

Words Beyond Words

Explanation: I got really depressed over something between my cousin and I, that's all I'm goin to say.

 

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------

Author's Note: happens, stress occurs, don't let it push you too far. That's all I have to say. Be careful guys. Don't forget to comment subscribe and recommend~ -BlytheForever12

 

 

The once silver knife stained with crimson red 

Not even a few wrist cuts can take away the pain 

So without a care I lift the bloody knife and slit my throat 

As I take my last jagged breaths I remember you and shed a final tear 

Although I felt I did best by you, I did wrong by myself and got to where I am now 

While my eyes slowly shut I whisper my final word, "Sorry.." 

I made you mad, so I fixed the problem, the one I caused by living. 

I pulled myself from the world so maybe now you can finally live life for real again. 

I loved you, I cared for you, I worried for you, but now you are on your own, and I can only watch. 

 

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!
Author's Thoughts
BlytheForever12
Hey everyone please check my blog! http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/508020
Read More →
Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
4ranghae #1
Chapter 32: i love reading your poems, even if they show your struggles they prove you dealt with them....
i feel like getting into poetry now ^^
4ranghae #2
Chapter 2: as long as you and your friend are okay ^^ your poetry really nice to read... sadly i can realate to a lot of it... T^T
nalgaewings #3
Chapter 32: I read everything :] I'm caught up haha. I love your poems cause they say something. Stay strong!
nalgaewings #4
Chapter 27: For this poem... I just wanted to let you know that taking your life is not going to solve any problems or make any one person more happy. If you think that leaving is going to make one person happy, what about all the other people that actually care for you? You'd hurt them as well... Dying is never the way to solve anything. I hope you feel loved <3 The people that are reading your works are giving it to you. I hope you feel it and get well soon <3
SullHeeSn0w #5
i love poetry and your poetry is daebak...
please be well soon...
^^...
nalgaewings #6
Chapter 20: I like that school poem! XD Way to stand up to your teacher. Boss xD
Marianations #7
Guys, the author of this story has tried to commit suicide. PLease, don't unsubscribe or say harsh things to her. Thank you.
Snuggles #8
Chapter 11: Awwww~ You're very good at poems~! I love this already!
sweet_mintx #9
Chapter 32: Hey, I'm a big poetry person, and I've been reading through many of your poems! The themes are great, the writing is amazing, and I'm super happy you've decided to write this sort of story on AFF. Sure, AFF is a site for fanfiction, but in my personal opinion, it's a site for all kinds of writing, for budding writers, and for non-judgemental friendship. Keep up the good work, the poems are great.
Back to Top ↑