Tried My Best

Words Beyond Words

 

You knew that I would be happy

You said,"It will be better, actually"

Now because of you, my name will never be called..

I hope you are proud of yourself now that she's gone

Because when she finds out I will snap like a twig

You are just a forever exploding bomb

I thought that you might have actually given in (this time)

 

 

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Explanation: This was back when I was in an abusive foster home for a while last year. I was referring to a friend that I still loved even though we weren't together anymore. My foster dad at the time said she could never come to the house again and yeah that should explain it..

 

 

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Author's Note: I am so happy I am out of that foster home now.. That place was horrible. I am happy in my new one now~! Please remember to comment and subscribe if you like! It keeps an author/poet going!

Love And Peace, BlytheForever12

 

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4ranghae
#1
Chapter 32: i love reading your poems, even if they show your struggles they prove you dealt with them....
i feel like getting into poetry now ^^
4ranghae
#2
Chapter 2: as long as you and your friend are okay ^^ your poetry really nice to read... sadly i can realate to a lot of it... T^T
nalgaewings #3
Chapter 32: I read everything :] I'm caught up haha. I love your poems cause they say something. Stay strong!
nalgaewings #4
Chapter 27: For this poem... I just wanted to let you know that taking your life is not going to solve any problems or make any one person more happy. If you think that leaving is going to make one person happy, what about all the other people that actually care for you? You'd hurt them as well... Dying is never the way to solve anything. I hope you feel loved <3 The people that are reading your works are giving it to you. I hope you feel it and get well soon <3
SullHeeSn0w
#5
i love poetry and your poetry is daebak...
please be well soon...
^^...
nalgaewings #6
Chapter 20: I like that school poem! XD Way to stand up to your teacher. Boss xD
Marianations #7
Guys, the author of this story has tried to commit suicide. PLease, don't unsubscribe or say harsh things to her. Thank you.
Snuggles
#8
Chapter 11: Awwww~ You're very good at poems~! I love this already!
sweet_mintx
#9
Chapter 32: Hey, I'm a big poetry person, and I've been reading through many of your poems! The themes are great, the writing is amazing, and I'm super happy you've decided to write this sort of story on AFF. Sure, AFF is a site for fanfiction, but in my personal opinion, it's a site for all kinds of writing, for budding writers, and for non-judgemental friendship. Keep up the good work, the poems are great.