When You Left

Words Beyond Words

 

I still remember the day when you left 
Those haunting last words I've always kept 
We were perfect, nothing could break us 
Except for the miles traveled away by plane and bus 
I tried to keep my heart locked up but you broke the chain and lock 
You treated me like I should be treated, to me this was a shock 

When you left, my heart went with you 
I stayed strong, knowing our love was true 
Now I'm starting to fear the worst 
You said we'd stay in contact of course 
Well when does that start? It has been months.. 
And now I'm slowly disappearing by small chunks 

Before you left you said I was your stars and stripes 
But now that you're gone, I don't even put up a fight 
I'm starting to think it was all just a dream 
Because anymore that's what it seems 
When you left, I fell apart 
Now all you have is my broken heart

 

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Explanation: Okkkkkaaayyyyy I'm lesbian. I met this guy who COMPLETELY RUINED me. In a good way. I became biual for him. He was EVERYTHING to me. He was 7 years older than me, and in the military. Well we stayed together for awhile although it was hard, until one day he texted me saying we couldn't talk for awhile because someone found out about us and he is going to court....

 

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Author's Note: This poem means a lot to me. It is helping me cope with what life threw at me. It has beena long time and I apologize to my readers but I am going to try and update more often! Please don't forget to Comment and Subscribe!!!

Peace and Love, BlytheForever12

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4ranghae
#1
Chapter 32: i love reading your poems, even if they show your struggles they prove you dealt with them....
i feel like getting into poetry now ^^
4ranghae
#2
Chapter 2: as long as you and your friend are okay ^^ your poetry really nice to read... sadly i can realate to a lot of it... T^T
nalgaewings #3
Chapter 32: I read everything :] I'm caught up haha. I love your poems cause they say something. Stay strong!
nalgaewings #4
Chapter 27: For this poem... I just wanted to let you know that taking your life is not going to solve any problems or make any one person more happy. If you think that leaving is going to make one person happy, what about all the other people that actually care for you? You'd hurt them as well... Dying is never the way to solve anything. I hope you feel loved <3 The people that are reading your works are giving it to you. I hope you feel it and get well soon <3
SullHeeSn0w
#5
i love poetry and your poetry is daebak...
please be well soon...
^^...
nalgaewings #6
Chapter 20: I like that school poem! XD Way to stand up to your teacher. Boss xD
Marianations #7
Guys, the author of this story has tried to commit suicide. PLease, don't unsubscribe or say harsh things to her. Thank you.
Snuggles
#8
Chapter 11: Awwww~ You're very good at poems~! I love this already!
sweet_mintx
#9
Chapter 32: Hey, I'm a big poetry person, and I've been reading through many of your poems! The themes are great, the writing is amazing, and I'm super happy you've decided to write this sort of story on AFF. Sure, AFF is a site for fanfiction, but in my personal opinion, it's a site for all kinds of writing, for budding writers, and for non-judgemental friendship. Keep up the good work, the poems are great.