Last Night

Words Beyond Words

You know, I haven't thought about you for a while now...

But last night, you were all I could think of...

I wonder, if you could see me now, would you be proud?

To me in shame, you would probably shun

Honestly, thinking of you again made me want to cry

But I remembered you saying that if I cry over you, inside a little bit you'd die.

But I couldn't hold it in for any longer

But least by everyday, I'm getting stronger.

Last night I saw you and me together in my dream

And you had a shirt on that said "We are the team"

Last night I saw you again smiling

And it brought me back to that moment.. where I was unable to speak because I was shy

Last night, you brought me back to life

 

 

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Explanation: I was referring to my dead ex-girlfriend Blythe (thus my username) who died on August 10 2010 I was remembering all the good times we shared.

 

 

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Author's Note: BWAH!!!! I can't believe I wrote this 3 months after she died!!!!!!!! It seems like forever ago! Well I guess it is..  Please remember to comment and subscribe if you like!!! 

Peace and Love, BlytheForever12

 

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4ranghae
#1
Chapter 32: i love reading your poems, even if they show your struggles they prove you dealt with them....
i feel like getting into poetry now ^^
4ranghae
#2
Chapter 2: as long as you and your friend are okay ^^ your poetry really nice to read... sadly i can realate to a lot of it... T^T
nalgaewings #3
Chapter 32: I read everything :] I'm caught up haha. I love your poems cause they say something. Stay strong!
nalgaewings #4
Chapter 27: For this poem... I just wanted to let you know that taking your life is not going to solve any problems or make any one person more happy. If you think that leaving is going to make one person happy, what about all the other people that actually care for you? You'd hurt them as well... Dying is never the way to solve anything. I hope you feel loved <3 The people that are reading your works are giving it to you. I hope you feel it and get well soon <3
SullHeeSn0w
#5
i love poetry and your poetry is daebak...
please be well soon...
^^...
nalgaewings #6
Chapter 20: I like that school poem! XD Way to stand up to your teacher. Boss xD
Marianations #7
Guys, the author of this story has tried to commit suicide. PLease, don't unsubscribe or say harsh things to her. Thank you.
Snuggles
#8
Chapter 11: Awwww~ You're very good at poems~! I love this already!
sweet_mintx
#9
Chapter 32: Hey, I'm a big poetry person, and I've been reading through many of your poems! The themes are great, the writing is amazing, and I'm super happy you've decided to write this sort of story on AFF. Sure, AFF is a site for fanfiction, but in my personal opinion, it's a site for all kinds of writing, for budding writers, and for non-judgemental friendship. Keep up the good work, the poems are great.